Conscience

United States
June 18, 2009 11:49am CST
Conscience The moon above shines up high One more night I face the sky Thinking of all the mistakes I made Lying awake in the cool night jade If I only knew now what I didn't know then I should have listened to the voice within That little voice deep deep down Listen close it will always be around
3 responses
lulu1220
@lulu1220 (1006)
• United States
18 Jun 09
Great poem! I totally agree with it.
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additional001
@additional001 (213)
• United States
18 Jun 09
Thanks for taking the time to share :)
Guitarpunk
@Guitarpunk (738)
• United States
18 Jun 09
Nice job dude! The third paragraph was awesome.
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additional001
@additional001 (213)
• United States
18 Jun 09
Thanks much appreciated :)
Bloggership
@Bloggership (1104)
• Indonesia
20 Jun 09
I love to read this one additional001... How come you were able to think of that?. It's triggering my past experience of life that i've already forgot... Do you really experiencing that too additional001?.. Cool 100 post point...