what do you think of my poem?
By arneljb
@arneljb (224)
Philippines
July 1, 2009 8:19pm CST
This my first time to share my original poem. i think that i made when i was still a new teacher. my korean student named Brian inspired me to do it. It's not out of love but it is about the "jung" they call it in their own Korean language.
NOW THAT I FOUND YOU BRIAN
The rainbow has been appearing from the horizon
After the heavy downpour of an eerie rain
Corroborated by the threat of the stinging lightning
And the wrath of the muttering thunder.
Flowers sprouting, within the savage zone
Blossoms shine as sun peeps behind the mountain
Blissed out bees and butterflies, together keep on dancing
In chime of the humming breeze that’s getting debonair.
Erstwhile there seems to be no sky
Canopy’s beauty exists only to sigh
Shoots emerge merely to die
Everyone comes to bid goodbye.
In the desert dissipated cactus screams
0n the verge of succumbing from the furious beams
But surmise to see the gentle rain
Although it is accustomed pain.
Robins in the nest start to sing
When in the twigs baboons swing
And in the ground varmint’s playing
While ducklings enjoy unrestrained flirting.
All and sundry turns to be enlivened
Now that I found you Brian.
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