Fade To Black
@additional001 (213)
United States
July 10, 2009 8:34pm CST
Fade to Black
When we were together
forever was just tomorrow
Time is torture now
and forever is filled with sorrow
No ill planned plots
or others persistence
has caused us to stray
we've been stopped by distance
Our current situation
is out of control
We hold on to yesterday
and memories of old
But how long must
these feelings be held back
Memories only last so long
after all they do fade to black
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@allegradream (210)
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16 Jul 09
I love your words additional, they really stir up emotions when I read them, and I can relate to them...beautifully written and executed...please keep them coming
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@additional001 (213)
• United States
17 Jul 09
I love that you guys love it and want to read more. The true measure of any poet is the ability to lay there soul on paper. The true measure of a GREAT poet is when others read it... and they get it... esentially for that brief moment... you are sharing your soul with that person... and they get you.
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