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I'll tell you what I'm doing. I'm currently working on my first book and although I've experience with writing for a living I've never written a novel. If you do a search for sample edit or free sample edit you'll find plenty of editors who will point you in the right direction and tell you which bits need work and all the rest of it. If it's advice you want on publishing, then add me to your friends list and message to let me know exactly what it is you need to know and I'll see if I can help.