because of you

@ypyanyan (956)
China
August 25, 2009 2:17am CST
I will not make the same mistakes that you did I will not let myself cause my heart so much misery I will not break the way you did You fell so hard I learned the hard way to never let it get that far because of you I never stray too far from the sidewalk Because of you I learnd to play on the safe side So I don't get hurt Because of you I find it hard to trust Not only me but everyone around me Because of you I am afraid I lose my way And it's not too long before you point you out I cannot cry Because I know that 's weakness in your eyes I'm forced to fake a smile ,a laugh every day of my life My heart can't possible break When it wasn't even whole to start with Because of you I never stray too far from the sidewalk Because of you
2 responses
@Citychic (4078)
• United States
25 Aug 09
Hello friend, I don't know exactly what you were attempting to do with this but just think it would make a great poem. It seem to make a lot of sense but it just need to have a little bit more continuity. I am a writer of poems myself and I like this a lot. It just seems to be missing out on a little bit of flow. I do hope that you will try to work on it a little more then perhaps think about getting it copywrited and published. So this way no-one can try to claim it at their own. Good luck and keep up the great work.
• United States
25 Aug 09
This is actually a song by Kelly clarkson, lol.
• United States
25 Aug 09
This is a wonderful song! I actually performed it during my senoir year at Highschool. I think what I like most about it is how she overcomes everything and didn't allow herself to become a victim like her father was. I think it is just so inspirational! Thank you for sharing this :)