innocence is lost.........must read it....

November 4, 2009 12:16am CST
collecting the toys,the tattoo,the cards,taht 'hide and seek' team waiting backyards,sometimes i feel that innocence is lost..... laying on the mother`s lap and gazing the stars,with ours 'super bicycles' cahsing the cars,sometimes i feel taht innocence is lost...... those 'heavy' school books,that 'heavy' school bags,no worries about the future and never a looking back,sometimes i feel that innocence is lost...... that dance in the rain,that hypothetical stomach pain,those funny toon movies,those stare at the planes,sometimes i feel that innocence is lost..... a sudden fever on monday or just before a test day,b`day cakes and candies were all time best,sometimes i feel that innocence is lost.... doing some mistakes and then hiding from the mom,a feel of triumph when dad was back home,sometimes i feel that innocence is lost..... unknowingly somewhere that childishness was narrowing,and today i feel innocence is lost..... guys you ever feel that innocence is lost.......
2 responses
@natnickeep (2340)
• United States
4 Nov 09
I don't feel that innocence is lost because I see it in my little girls faces every day. But that was some great writing! Thanks I enjoyed reading it.
• India
5 Nov 09
You are welcome..You are welcome...
@athomice (396)
• Philippines
4 Nov 09
That's part of life...growing up! I've felt that always, everytime I see children playing I feel that. And because of that I created "Young Adult" (my post, for young adult). Try reading it.