One more Dead

United States
January 5, 2010 11:52pm CST
Sitting on this bench, Sitting just sitting, Dressed in black, Smoking this cammel wide..... RING RING click Jay-Yo Kyle-We got a problem Jay-What kinda problem Kyle-Joe is dead man then shot him point blank to the back. Jay-.... kyle-... Jay-I know what I gotta do I gotta keep my promise. Kyle- I know be careful alright. Jay-You aint gotta worry about me homie. send my regards to his family. Slowly getting up and walking down the street street I was expecting this. I had hoped it wouldn't happen but it did and now something has to be done. Getting ready for what was about to happen I hand gun to my left side a 6 inch switch blade to my left side and a sawed off shotty over my shoulder and threw on my coat. Its dusk now. The the red tint of the sky as the sun sets give the feeling of blood shed. I am ready to die if need be for the revenge of my brothers death. Driving to the drug dealers house he was murdered at all I can think is how could they do this? But then I thought money that is all they care about money... Pulling into number 5 Murdock lane as casual a can be. Walking up onto the deck there is a fat man. I flick my cigarette into his face. He gets up to throw a punch as my rusty blade slides across his neck. PATHETIC! Kicking the door in to this run down crack house three people sit in the living room. Instantly one reaches for his gun BANG BANG BANG two shots to for chest and one shot to the face. Another has his gun pointing at me and says put the gun down. Looking at him out of the corner of my eye I slightly lower my gun and it drops to the floor. He walks over to the guy in the corner sniffing some what must have been some really good china white because he had not even noticed what was going on. Well I had a trick up my sleeve. I take the shotty from the back which had been covered by my cloak like jacket. This guy gets a scatter shot to his knees. He begs me for his life but all I can do is smile and say your dead and fire my last scatter shot into his throat. He droped to the ground breathed in two slight breaths of blood and died. Looking to the only one that was lest in the room I said your next. All he did was clap his hands and say ahaahah so cute big brother come to avenge the death of his precious family. You were to late you cant bring him back. I know but I can kill you slowly and painfully I might add. Pointing the now empty shotty at his head saying get up and walk. As he slowly walking into the middle of the room. Outside now! Now we are in the middle of the street. I say Our family warned you not to cross us and now look where you are. buu. Shut up you dont get to talk!! Pray to your god because your about to die a horrible death. Then taking the shotty turning it around I smash the butt end across his face he falls to the ground. Then The rusty switch blade comes back out. Slowly cutting his wrist upwards. As he looks into my eyes I stap him in his troat. and watch him slowly drown in his own blood. He takes his last breath as i spit in his face. My job is done for another day Just another one dead.
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@jshan87 (31)
• United States
12 Jan 10
I'm interested to know what gave you the desire to write this, Personal experience? Do you feel it will benefit anyone to read it?