Wrote a poem--what do you think?
By katvengo
@katvengo (18)
United States
February 9, 2010 10:09pm CST
The Night I Drank My Weight in Tea
I drank my weight in tea
on a cool winters night
when clouds were black as soot
And God's eye must have been sore
from crying all day--bright and puffy
they must have been--
it was a wonderful tragedy
gray horses broke out in run
as I heard dying laughter from man's rum
it could have been a red moon
with those loud rumblings I heard
all night long
but alas not a mouse stirred
nor spider crawled
and made the woman next door break cry
olny ink scratched parchment
As I drank my weight in tea
1 response
@nishdan01 (3051)
• Singapore
12 Feb 10
Nice and it would be nice if you would publish at some site. You will get lot more visitors and lot more comments.
