Do you like this scene?

@monalily (380)
August 22, 2010 7:00am CST
love is beautiful it can happen to you anytime at first site or by gradually knowing the partner. I have never been fallen in love yet but i love watching romantic moments between a couple on tv especially. I am suggesting a love scene which you may like or not. its coming from my imagination. In an arranged marriage after sometime both partners love each other and the wife is expressing her feeling to his husband? wife:'I have something important to tell you' husban'd: stopped while going from bedroom ,pillow in hand, turn around. 'ok' wife: I am sorry i hurt you alot from my previous behaviour. forgive me' husband: 'its ok every1 makes mistake' wife: ' i know i was never a good wife but i promise i'll be the best wife forever.(3sec elapsed) I love you James husband:(overjoyed) i love you too. i love you. thanks God for believing in my love. they embraced each other and James lift his wife and put her in bed.. they make love first time... do you like the scene?
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2 responses
@akn1961 (1035)
• India
22 Aug 10
scene is lovely like u ,thx for sharing ur story ,keep it up.
@monalily (380)
23 Aug 10
@ada8may21 (2419)
• Philippines
22 Aug 10
I am sorry but I dont find it romantic... I guess the words are not that expressive compare to what I read in the novels. I am expecting for more in delivering the words. Sorry but my expectation is quite too high when it comes to the romantic words. But I guess that would be more romantic if its seen in real scene. But if I am just going to read it, something is missing.
@monalily (380)
22 Aug 10
thx 4 ur comment but i am not a writer. i just had this scene in my dream and i wrote it.