"There are lot more thing in your life which makes worth living"
By mayur71091
@mayur71091 (425)
India
4 responses
@bokal2703 (802)
• Philippines
26 Aug 10
There are more things in your life which will make it worth living...I think that one is better...
@mayur71091 (425)
• India
26 Aug 10
Thanks,
actually m' struggling little more in English, as i have started to learning it since last half a year.
@bokal2703 (802)
• Philippines
26 Aug 10
i see, well, just read more english books or articles. You can learn from that too..goodluck.
@mayur71091 (425)
• India
26 Aug 10
Doesn't matter how impressive you can talk but you should also be grammatically correct, m i right. yes i am !
That's where i make mistakes, and i am trying my best, after all its completely new language for me.
(sorry for speech mistakes)
@sweetloveforeve (13107)
• Portugal
6 Sep 10
no is not^^ but is ok everyone makes mistakes^^ i think it is said like this: there are a lot more things in life that makes it worth living^^ i would say like this^^ or which makes it worth living is the good things that we can have in our life^^ anyway i like the first one more^^ what do you think? :) im not american neither english im portuguese but i learnt english for some years so i think this is correct^^
@mayur71091 (425)
• India
10 Sep 10
Thanks!
actually i am also not an American or not even British.
but as English is must language so i m trying to do better in it.
That's all.
@dorothyDauphinee (534)
• United States
26 Aug 10
'there are (a) lot more thing(s) in your life that make (it) worth living"
