The Story of My Life
September 11, 2010 5:04am CST
My life has become black and white, There were some colours, but they have now fade. Wasan't I so Happy all these years, How sorrowness filled my eyes with tears. I won't blame for this on anyone, Coz, for all these, "HE" would have a strong reason. May be, he want's me to be strong, I that I could face this cruel world some long. My now may be black and white, But to make it colourful, I will again fight. I will not fear, niether will I loose hope, Even the dark becomes darker, as this way it gonna be. One day I know there will be joy, For this reason, I will never stop my try.
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11 Sep 10
Very nice poem. I would like to add some more "Sometimes,there were times we must say goodbye Thu it hurts we must learn to try I know i've got to let you go But i know anywhere you go You'll never be far Just like a bright star YOU'll be shining in my life YOU'll gonna be right here in MY HEART " No distance,can keep us apart Coz, You'll be here in My Heart " Have a great weekend
11 Sep 10
Nice poem! Kind of reminds me of the Elton John song "Don't let the sun go down on me." Have you tried to find more joy by trying to get to know God better? I have found that a daily program of Bible reading, reading 4-5 chapters a day, a perfect part of the recipe for happiness. The more we understand God, the more we understand why there are so many sad things in this world. He tell us all of this is temporary. There are many joys ahead for those that love Him serve Him.
12 Sep 10
hello kartiknaiduk! it's a beautiful poem with so much inspiration, courage and hope in it. And i agree with it, even though life could become colorless because of some sad and hurting incidents in our lives, we could still continue to live and strive to have beauty and color once more in our lives. Life is a journey and in order for us to get to our destination, we meet many hurdles and obstacles along the way. It is our choice to be bogged down by these obstacles or to overcome them, so we could be well on our way once more towards our destination. You have been able to capsulize a megaton of thoughts and feelings in a few lines of poems. You're good. keep up the work.
12 Sep 10
Hello,kartiknaiduk,I like your poem.Your poem not only giving yourself courage to beat the difficulties but also us at the same. Recently,I have read a book ,the author is a professor who is from Xiamen University.From the book ,I have much knowledge .You know ,there are fou seasons so that we know the spring is beautiful,the summer is hot,the fall is harvest,the winner is cold.You know,there is crying so that we know the nice felling of happiness.You know,there are the rainning days so that we know the importance of the sunny days.You are right the black and white wii make us become stronger than before.You are right we will not fear no matter what happened.I know we will face the everything no matter it is good or bad.The only reason is that we love the lives.