The Passion Of Rain

Philippines
September 22, 2010 12:08am CST
As i sit beyond our window wondering why it happens, The Dark gray Skies give us fears. The Thunderstorm make us weak. The roaring wind makes us sick because of coldness, Like life beyond we struggles. As look up in the sky waiting to fall Tiny teardrops that was fall. It Makes me cold because of the wind. Seems Plants love it most. Why does it feels alone when it rains. Why does my heart feels empty when it fell. But it so lovely when i hear the falling sound. Tiny teardrops that was fell. like we cry seems to compare. I know for sure it will stop The tiny teardrops keeps on drop. It will cleansed my mind because of you. Now i realize why does it rains. To join me when i feel loneliness. The teardrops that fall from the sky. Will relieve pain on my mind. Because after the cold and dark gray sky. A new life will shine beyond the Sky.
2 responses
• Quezon City, Philippines
23 Sep 10
yes, rain is a nice metaphor for crying. i also like what you did with the ending. it gives a glimmer of hope. nice poem!
• Philippines
23 Sep 10
Thanks for appreciating this poem :)
@tigeraunt (6331)
• Philippines
22 Sep 10
dear turing, its beautiful. wondering why loneliness in a person enables to create beautiful things like this poem? the topic so lovely. i hope you create more poems. ann
• Philippines
23 Sep 10
Sometime being alone is good too. where you can create some things like art or in poetry writing