I Love You...

@tears08 (161)
July 27, 2011 12:53pm CST
I just wanna share one of the poems that i wrote. i hope you would like it I love you though this maybe wrong But my feelings for you just grow strong I love you though yet i haven't seen you I love you and I wanna be with you I love you yet you're so far away I love you and to be with you ill find a way I love you and I want you here beside me I love you yet why can't it be? I love you yet I can't touch you I love you yet I can't hold you I love you yet I can't hug you I love you yet I can't kiss you I love you though you're not mine But loving you makes me feel fine I love you I love you yet with me you can't stay I love you please don't go away I love you yesterday I love you now I love you still I love you and I'll always will
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ckdbandara
@ckdbandara (236)
• Sri Lanka
27 Jul 11
good one... but the thing is how a person love a imaginary person this much? and the other problem is how you love a person without even seen him or her?
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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27 Jul 11
thanks for your comment. actually the story behind this was.. i fell in love with my chat mate. basically this is like long distance relationship. so its like we love each other but we cant be together because of the distance. that's the reason why i said i cant touch,hug, kiss the person
ckdbandara
@ckdbandara (236)
• Sri Lanka
28 Jul 11
mmmmm, dear friend do not believe in your chat mates. Use skype or any other way to see her. :)
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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28 Jul 11
dear friend, thanks a lot for the concern, we just turned 5 years last May. We've been together already but due to some reason we are again far from each other. we are right now in long distance relationship
waflay
@waflay (2737)
• Nairobi, Kenya
27 Jul 11
Nice words even though sorrowful but creatively entertaining. Words of painful heart, always be felt and be heard, What can make things not bad, when it's already so bad?. I have heard your cry my friend, and poetry relieves pain trend, ..and will come to pass at the end, If you learn to forget my friend. Spare your lost love for some time, I know you'll be okay in time, Even though it gonna be hard for sometime, Just believe you can by time.
waflay
@waflay (2737)
• Nairobi, Kenya
27 Jul 11
I write them only when I'm worried about something or during my sad moments. They are cool and works grat for me. Cheers! Poetry lives.
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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27 Jul 11
oh..that's nice. it's nice to express your emotions in writing. its like you could just say anything.. it helps you to somehow ease whatever you are feeling
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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27 Jul 11
Thank you for your compliment. wow that's nice one. so i guess you are a poet. hehe. you must be writing poems also. one thing that really inspires me is when i am in love :) doesnt matter if i am happy in love or suffering from love. lol
Morning Girl
@salonga (27775)
• Philippines
24 Sep 11
I love you - Powerful words!
You must be a very romantic person. This trait of yours enables you to write this love poem. Well I like the poem and I think you make a good job in writing this. Someday soon I hope you become a great poet. So keep writing poems and keep loving as well. Good wishes for your!
paula27661
@paula27661 (15811)
• Australia
28 Jul 11
Very beautiful poem depicting very deep feelings for someone you obviously love from afar. I could feel your angst while reading your poem. I hope your love gets the chance to read it and be moved by it. I hope it all works out for you. Well done…
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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28 Jul 11
:) thank you very much for the very nice compliment :D. it is hard to be in a long distance relationship. but as long as you have deep feelings and stay strong then relationship will last. i wrote other poems also, i will post it soon
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jiyeon21
@jiyeon21 (102)
• Philippines
28 Jul 11
wow that's nice, it's simple but full of love and meaning for the one you love. will that's is really hard especially if you are in a long distance relationship.
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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29 Jul 11
yes it is hard to be in long distance relationship, its like everything is in trial.. its so hard when you miss someone and long to be with that person but you are miles apart and theres nothing that u could do. :( sad, but well... i have to be strong we've been together for 5 yrs now
pacrptc
@pacrptc (231)
• United States
27 Jul 11
props :) that was a great little poem... i liked it a lot and you can tell there is a lot of feeling behind it and the way it rolls off is great to...
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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27 Jul 11
Thank you very much for appreciating the poem :)yes you are right indeed there is a lot of feelings behind it that is called being in love hehe, its nice to be in love.. most of the times.. haha.. it inspires me
tears08
@tears08 (161)
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28 Jul 11
wow thats so nice you still feel the magic everyday, how long have you been married? any kids?
pacrptc
@pacrptc (231)
• United States
28 Jul 11
i know... it's just so magical... i am married and still feel that magic at least once a day :) it is indeed a great feeling.