What is It
By tears08
@tears08 (161)
July 30, 2011 1:04pm CST
I wanna share another poem. I wrote this poem the first time i fell in love, funny though, i was in a review class (high school) but instead of reviewing i was inspired to write this poem
What Is It
What is it that's in you
Made me fell in love with you
What is it that you do
Made me stay with you
What is in you that I see
Now love is all i feel in me
I don't know what's wrong with me
But it's you I long to be
What is it that you have
When I met you I'm so glad
Whenever i look at the sky above
It's you I see and i feel your love
What is in you I like much
Maybe it's the feel of your touch
The first time you hold my hand
I felt something I can't understand
Whatever it is that's in you
All I can say is I love you
My love for you will not only stay longer
But instead, it will last forever
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5 responses
@nightarchangel (40)
• Philippines
1 Aug 11
Now this one has captured my interest. I felt the same way before, yet sometimes we just have to express it through writing, because there's the 'impossible' side of things that we may never can tell. Anyway, your poems are relatively awesome! I hope I can learn more from you! More Power and Keep Up The Great Job!
@tears08 (161)
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1 Aug 11
wow, thanks for appreciating my poem, it maybe i could write poems for a living (part-time) hehe. yes in poems we could express our feelings deep inside us which sometimes we cannot express in person or we could express our feelings which we cannot say towards the person we love :)
@paula27661 (15811)
• Australia
31 Jul 11
Very well done. Another fine piece about the feeling of falling in love. It says it all in such a beautiful way. Keep writing your poetry, you are very good at it. You should keep them and have them published somewhere. Good work!
@tears08 (161)
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31 Jul 11
Thank you very much for the heart warming compliment... It inspires me more to write more poems.. Thought of having my poems published but i don't know where to send it..i don't know when and how to start to have my poem publish..hehe.. But hopefully soon i will find some publisher to have my poems publish
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@catof1 (683)
• United States
30 Jul 11
Very good. You should keep all the poem you write and look them over and over to nit pick here and there until you have your final product. I know that is what my mother did and then she sent in some of her poems to be published. She got her work published and then recieved money and awards for them. She is truly a talented person to write from the soul the way she does. I hope that you can make something out of yours since they are a part of you and your life. I find that poems express ones self very well and lets you have a peak into their soul.
