create song's? i can't (3)

Indonesia
September 29, 2011 8:41am CST
now we have finished our song in english language. but the problem is: did the song have correct word? we just create the song with english that we know, and i feel strange when i sing it. i need somebody that can help me to check it. i need your help here.
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@huilichan8 (1379)
• Singapore
29 Sep 11
I write songs too. If you don't mind, cld you upload the song and let's see if I cld help? Thanks. You juz want help to check the lyrics, I suppose?
• Indonesia
29 Sep 11
i'll do it. better if i add you as my friend first.
• Singapore
29 Sep 11
Oh I've already approved your friend request.:)
• Indonesia
30 Sep 11
ok, now i send you the lyrics.
@jaiho2009 (39079)
• Philippines
30 Sep 11
You can asks a close friend to help you with it. Of your family and even your teacher. I know we felt we are not doing the right thing or we are afraid that we are writing the wrong sentence, so,it's fine to asks help from someone who are close to us.
• Indonesia
30 Sep 11
well jaiho2009, no one in my family can english. and my teacher? i have 8 years doesn't see him. my friend too can't use english with good. it's hard to found a good english user here, in my place.