My love

March 1, 2012 10:47am CST
"Like the rain drops we came togather. Holding hand in hand we laughed.. Then uttered we will never part.. But the fate so jealous made us rivers... Flowed us to distant places.. Never to see again"
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5 responses
@chulce (1540)
• United States
1 Mar 12
What a pretty poem and a good way to release stress. I hope to see more of your writing through out mylot. Do you enjoy writing poems? Do you have a favorite author of poetry?
• India
2 Mar 12
i too hope i can write here more:-). And thank you
@Shavkat (66940)
• Philippines
17 Jul 12
"My love" is an endearing phrase for those who are deeply in love or parted ways for some reasons. As for me, "my love" is how I addressed to my only love out there. It was only decided to call each other "my love" accidentally, thinking what is the best endearing name to express the inner most feeling. So, I uttered, "My love". I am sure most of you will wonder and ask why? It is just simply because I love that person, there is no other adjectives to describe the overpowering affection from within. That is how destiny foretell the meaning of "LOVE". The bottom line, let us ponder the moment, either you are in deeply-in-love or not. Let love inspires us all.
@Metatronik (5923)
• Pasay, Philippines
5 Mar 12
Wow that is a nice poem. So are you inspired and taken already?
@vt689586 (585)
• India
3 Mar 12
what a beautiful lines by you .looks you could become a good this your original lines.if yes then you have a strong feeling for someone and i think you also have to write more like this and you will be good poet one day.but if it is not your lines then also i appreciate your work to write and share these lines with us .
1 Mar 12
you are near,even if i dont see are with me even if your far away. you are in my heart, in my thoughts , in my life , ALWAYSZZZZZ