Flowers of Wonderland
By kristiane
@kristiane (112)
Philippines
March 9, 2012 7:20pm CST
I just want to share a poem to you about love. Hope you'll enjoy reading it.
Flowers of Wonderland
Scent of heaven is what I smell
Different perfumes,happiness I feel
Special colognes, for the princess in tale
That's what I thought when I heard the ringing bells
Flowers of glory, flowers of new life
Flowers of love, guided by God's light
Here we are entering into a glorious sight
Two hearts are combined with special might
Just like a fairy tale come true
When I was walking in the aisle to you
Feeling of eternity is pouring through
Our hearts intermingling, I'll stay forever with you
I can smell the flowers of wonderland
I can hear the playing of swam in the pond
I can see the bright in the magic wand
I can feel the sensation of forever love.
1 response
@Vvance (280)
• United States
10 Mar 12
Hi Kristiane,
Thanks for your second comment.
Well, I checked out 'The Broken Pages'. But, poetic as it seems, the page is broken.
Lol. It's been deleted by Mylot, or at least that's what's been shown there.
So I read this instead, hope that's okay.
This one is beautifully written. You've managed to immerse the reader in his imagination and take him with you to the place you are.
Hmmm... shall I ask you something a little personal? Were you thinking of anyone while writing this poem? That's the impression I had and I wanted to see if I was right.
@kristiane (112)
• Philippines
11 Mar 12
I wrote "Flowers of Wonderland" few years ago and it has nothing to do with anyone. One of my recent works is "The Broken Pages" and it was written emotionally, but sadly, Mylot deleted it, but surprisingly their reason is that it was a plagiarized copy! I already e-mailed them to check it again and tell me where they have seen it published because I never did plagiarized that poem, I made it myself and I can prove that.
