help help!

March 10, 2012 8:00am CST
well,i'm a girl who is come from Shanghai and i'm a junior school student.And i want to go to the Hongkong chinese university for further education,so i need to pass the IELTS.I love HONGKONG and i want to go there for my dream...but now,i'm facing the coming exam of ielts,but my composition and speaking are very very poor...so i want to find a friend to help me with my composition and i also want that when i finished my composition,i would send it to you and you can modify them for me...dear friends,can you help me?please tell me ...hope for your reply,yours sincerely,Lily~~~~
1 response
@ajk111 (2527)
10 Mar 12
a few weeks on mylot will help improve your written english and increase the chances of meeting good friends to help improve your oral.
14 Mar 12
yes,you're right...but i always use simple sentences and i think the examiner of the ielts could not like my composition....