"Real Love"
By LaLa Leo
@mrscallands22 (2852)
United States
May 3, 2012 7:58pm CST
Me and you are so very young,
Who would've thought we'd be together this long!
My love for you grows stronger day by day,
And I hope that you may feel the same way.
Me and you were seriously meant to be.
So if we ever break up, you couldn't possibly forget about me.
Someday me and you will be together,
And hopefully when we get married, we'll be together forever.
I've grown to love you with all my heart.
Most people come in contact with say that loving you is not smart.
A lot of girls hate me because of you,
But I gotta do what I gotta do.
And until the day when we are grown,
Don't forget the love I have shown.
But until you actually realize how I feel,
And understand that my love is real.
Remember how I feel for you,
And you may love me the same way, too.
Poem written by me a longgg time ago.
2 responses
@mrscallands22 (2852)
• United States
4 May 12
lol I appreciate that.. it is really old.. written in like the 8th grade maybe.. I am 24 now.
Thanks for commenting!!
@welkin (106)
• China
4 May 12
So beautiful a poem!It rhymes pretty well,isn't it?
Actually love itself is so beautiful.I am 22 now,and I can still think of the wonderful feeling when I met the girl I love with all my heart.Like the scene in film «Flipped»,we are young when we fell in love.So many years has passed,we are still with each other.
A partner in life is so precious and important.Accompanying with one person for a whole life may be not that easy,but it is one of the most beautiful things in life.
Hope you find the real love written in your poem and have a wonderful life!
@mrscallands22 (2852)
• United States
4 May 12
I agree. Love is a magical experience when it's true love. Most people spend their whole lives searching for the right one. I think I've found him.. and hopefully I get to keep him. He's 23.. I'm about to be 25.. but somehow it feels like I've known him my entire life. I am about to leave a marriage that was long overdue as well and start completely over. But I'm ok with that, and I know that with God's help, nothing can hold me back. I am destined for greatness!
Thanks for reading and sharing your views!!
