Traveling bag
By olivetree27
@olivetree27 (495)
Greece
November 7, 2012 2:06pm CST
As a preparation for a huge project that I must accomplish at the end my school year, I am trying my best to improve my writing skill. I am trying to practice by writing stories and poems and reading literature books. This is a poem i wrote about an unforgettable experience and realization last summer.
Traveling Bag
From a two days visit in the city
Here I am back to reality
In a lonely island with magnificent sea
Working hard as I should be.
In the bus stop I waited patiently
The bus just left, I did not see
I guess it was not my lucky day
To wait again is the only way
So I decided to take a stroll
And visit the town's mall
For I may not have another chance
To visit this town some other time
Everything was going fine
Except for this heavy luggage of mine
As I pull it, it creates a scrapping sound.
I wish there is a luggage section around.
But unfortunately, I have no choice
But to endure this annoying noise
In the end, I still had fun
Walking in the morning sun
But next time I will visit the sea
I will not bring this traveling bag with me
I will have my hands baggage free
So I can enjoy the time, comfortably.
And when I take the walk of life
I will leave behind the pain and strife
Because they are like traveling bags
Hindering me from enjoying life.
1 response
@Anne18 (11029)
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13 Nov 12
I really enjoyed reading your poem, keep up the very good writing work. It takes me back to when I was a teenager and I wrote poems.
Hopefully people will now see this very good poem and write more good comments about it, well done my friend. I look forward ot reading some more of your very good work
@olivetree27 (495)
• Greece
13 Nov 12
Thank you for your nice comment and I'm glad you appreciate it. Teenagers love to write poem in order to express themselves however, I think you should not stop writing poems even if you're now an adult because I think you really love poems.:))
