November 7, 2012 2:06pm CST
As a preparation for a huge project that I must accomplish at the end my school year, I am trying my best to improve my writing skill. I am trying to practice by writing stories and poems and reading literature books. This is a poem i wrote about an unforgettable experience and realization last summer. Traveling Bag From a two days visit in the city Here I am back to reality In a lonely island with magnificent sea Working hard as I should be. In the bus stop I waited patiently The bus just left, I did not see I guess it was not my lucky day To wait again is the only way So I decided to take a stroll And visit the town's mall For I may not have another chance To visit this town some other time Everything was going fine Except for this heavy luggage of mine As I pull it, it creates a scrapping sound. I wish there is a luggage section around. But unfortunately, I have no choice But to endure this annoying noise In the end, I still had fun Walking in the morning sun But next time I will visit the sea I will not bring this traveling bag with me I will have my hands baggage free So I can enjoy the time, comfortably. And when I take the walk of life I will leave behind the pain and strife Because they are like traveling bags Hindering me from enjoying life.
13 Nov 12
I really enjoyed reading your poem, keep up the very good writing work. It takes me back to when I was a teenager and I wrote poems. Hopefully people will now see this very good poem and write more good comments about it, well done my friend. I look forward ot reading some more of your very good work