Should I make this a story?
By victoria
@victoria999 (1)
Fredericton, New Brunswick
July 26, 2014 8:44am CST
I want to write a book I don't really have any writing experience but this is the summary for what I want to write about; btw it's suppose to be kind of weird like coraline.
When 16 year old Ferryn wakes up to discover her car in a ditch along with both her parents dead she has no clue what to do. She's in the middle of no where. Ferryn goes on a search for help and finds herself meeting other people that don't know where they are either, in a fight to get back to the real world Ferryn unexpectedly wakes up stuck in a surreal/parallel universe. At first this place seems like hell, but Ferryn ends up falling in love,making friends and feeling the best she has ever felt. Ferryn must decide weather to leave and face the struggles of the real world or to stay in this odd universe.
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6 responses
@Bluedoll (16774)
• Canada
27 Jul 14
I think you should definitely write it and let your imagination soar. I like the look of Coraline and your outline so far sounds great. Write it as you like but if it was me I would not kill mom and dad right at the beginning. They might prove useful later on. She could just wonder off getting lost. It is an interesting comparison that the parallel universe is like hell and the world we live in can be too sometimes. However, I am sure she will brighten her part in your story?
@Sybelle (5)
• United States
28 Jul 14
Sounds a bit like The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe. Personally, I would take your basic vision, come up with some kind of personal struggle and sacrifice, then build on that foundation. Good luck!
@Youenvyyana (1)
• United States
27 Jul 14
I think you should also create your story with this plot . I have big interest in stories like this because at the end you'll still have extra thoughts about what else could happen. Of course it will take a while until you're actually able to publish your story. Just make sure you write using your MOST creative outrageous thoughts , that way it'll be SUPER interesting and more people will want to read it.
@graysonkitten (1)
• United States
29 Jul 14
Yes, you should. It will be great if you spend time writing and thinking though everything. Don't rush. Also remember, never delete. All writers have times when they think their book sucks, don't delete, edit.
