ALL about Writing, Proofreading! Checking For Errors! I need HELP!

United States
December 17, 2014 6:39am CST
I wrote up a paragraph or you might call it a short story and I need help in checking for errors and making it sound better. Please let me know if you could help me. This is not for school, it's for personal use...something I would like to share with my family. Thanks in advance!
1 response
• Shanghai, China
18 Dec 14
pls post yr short story.