Suddendeath Poem Challenge - Week 1

@just4him (306354)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
January 16, 2016 2:58pm CST
Resolution, tree, stinky, orange, cranky A New Year is upon me Wonders do I see I hope it won't be stinky As I take down the tree. A New Year of resolutions Full of hope and absolutions No more cranky consolations As I work through my solutions A New Year for a proper diet No more sweets, no can't have it I'm turning into a blooming rabbit Oranges, apples, veggies -what a habit. There you have it - my first sudden death poem for the year. Now just two more to go.
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Jekca
@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
17 Jan 16
I like the fact this is very straightforward, no fancy words, and it still manages to sound really good and flow well, well done!
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The Horse
@TheHorse (205792)
• Walnut Creek, California
17 Jan 16
Thank you. Oh. Never mind.
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (306354)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
17 Jan 16
@TheHorse I got a bit confused earlier too. It happens with the discussions piling up on each other.
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (306354)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
17 Jan 16
Thank you.
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The Horse
@TheHorse (205792)
• Walnut Creek, California
16 Jan 16
I will write poems/only when inspiration/strikes me like lightning
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (306354)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
16 Jan 16
I'm usually the same way. However, I do like a challenge and @jessalynnt presented a good one with this weekly challenge of which I was three weeks behind, now two.
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Jekca
@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
17 Jan 16
@just4him lol, and they keep on coming, one a week give or take
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The Horse
@TheHorse (205792)
• Walnut Creek, California
17 Jan 16
@Jessicalynnt perhaps I will check/or perhaps I'll be lazy/and sip Scotch and play
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