Poetry- It's all about you

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Well this isn't exactly a discussion but just that I wanted you people to read my poem and discuss what it means and how is it. I wrote it 2-3 months ago and I'm not sure if it's good or not. Please read and discuss and tell me how is it. Thanks. IT'S ALL ABOUT YOU You can build your tomorrow But you cannot tear down your past You can learn from your mistakes But you cannot erase the last You may be hurt by the swords and stakes But you can bear them as battle scars You may be in the deepest part of the ocean But you have to reach the stars You may not be accepted by some But you are unique and cannot be replaced You might be surrounded by murk from all sides But just look within for the light that has been encased You might get tired of trying and want to quit But trying harder will only take you away from failure You sometimes feel that you aren't brave enough But in the end you are your very own saviour -Wanderlust_she_be