Terror Stories / myLot

@quantum2020 (12040)

Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico

April 2, 2016 5:37pm CST

disturbing the window´s curtains An insect, a fly or bird It´s turning the fabric into somethning strange It wide opens its mouth The wind which doesn´t stop causes it to warp and vanish Illusory pretention from mother nature Barely remains, traces of an ondulating piece of texture Short piece of literature that I composed based on a real night passage. What comes to your mind when reading this passage of terror?

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Anna

@LadyDuck (460657)

• Switzerland

3 Apr 16

This is a very good and interesting poem. Reading your words I can imagine the scene.

Jose Juan

@quantum2020 (12040)

• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico

3 Apr 16

This was from a night just before going to sleep while taking a peek outside through the window´s curtains.

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@Macarrosel (7498)

• Philippines

3 Apr 16

Nice poem and you're a great poet. You're using great words in it and that makes it awesome. Well, I have to see some of the words you used here in my dictionary to fully understand the thoughts of this poem...hahaha.

Jose Juan

@quantum2020 (12040)

• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico

3 Apr 16

Thanks! that is very stimulating. It makes me look for more inspiration to start writing the next poem.