If you can see me now

@sol_cee (15542)
Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
June 10, 2016 9:29am CST
I woke up Sad and gloomy One cold grey morning. I was minding My own business Then you came without warning. You looked at me Stopped in your tracks Then began to touch me. You looked through me You stared too long You looked beyond; not only see. In a singsong voice You flattered me with your words oh so sweet. The honeyed smile You offered Purely sinful treat. I began to cherish Your presence I started to flirt. But in the end You pulled me From my world which is the earth. (The woes of a lovely rose to a passerby. )
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@responsiveme (16399)
• India
10 Jun 16
Did you write that?
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
Why, yes ma'am. May I ask why?
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• India
10 Jun 16
@sol_cee I liked it . It has an element of surprise . Do post more.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
@responsiveme Thanks. You're not OJ? lol
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@Lucky15 (33382)
• Philippines
11 Jun 16
The rose have made someone felt.loved...the receiver. ;)
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Your ex! He's the culprit. lol
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@Lucky15 (33382)
• Philippines
12 Jun 16
@sol_cee hahaha. True!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
@Lucky15 but you were happy. lol
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@toniganzon (50006)
• Philippines
11 Jun 16
So sentimental.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
11 Jun 16
haha did it ruin your morning? lol
@toniganzon (50006)
• Philippines
11 Jun 16
@sol_cee Nope not really, it's a gloomy day and i'm feeling exhausted. Wished to take a nap but Stephen Curry's handsome face got me hooked on NBA tv.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
@toniganzon Stephen Curry is as spicy hot as his curry name sake. lol
@DianneN (78465)
• United States
10 Jun 16
Thank goodness it was only a poor rose. Nicely done!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Maybe your husband plucked the rose to give it to you. lol
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@DianneN (78465)
• United States
15 Jun 16
@sol_cee He plucked me heather in Scotland once, roots and all! LOL
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
16 Jun 16
@DianneN lol that's funny. can't help but remember this Harry Potter scene.
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@salonga (28016)
• Philippines
10 Jun 16
Oh so sorry for the lovely rose!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Did you use rose in your niece's wedding?
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@salonga (28016)
• Philippines
12 Jun 16
@sol_cee Yes, white roses for the bride's bouquet, it's her favorite flower.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
@salonga so you plucked the rose. lol
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• United States
10 Jun 16
truly delightful! i simply adore yer poetic verse to many facets'f "life", yer take'n 'em most unique :D
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
I still have to write something related to horses. lol
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• United States
10 Jun 16
@sol_cee i'd love to read such! jest hop'n o'er 'n visit with the ones here fer a week'r 2. i'm most certain ya could com'p with somethin' very witty :)
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
@crazyhorseladycx a lowly horseshoe perhaps? lol
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@jaboUK (53989)
• United Kingdom
10 Jun 16
Well I couldn't work out what this one was going to be, so well done.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
Wasn't kind enough today to give out a few hints. lol
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@jaboUK (53989)
• United Kingdom
10 Jun 16
@sol_cee Nope - not even a little hint!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
11 Jun 16
@jaboUK so selfish of me. sorry.. lol
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@epiffanie (10466)
• Australia
12 Jun 16
Wow! thanks for sharing that! ..I will never look at the roses in my garden the same way again ;
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Haha and the other flowers too.
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@epiffanie (10466)
• Australia
12 Jun 16
@sol_cee yes.. even the weeds I suppose ..
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
@epiffanie lowly weeds they're not. lol
@dpk262006 (56170)
• Delhi, India
17 Jun 16
Beautiful poem and I suppose it has been written by you. I feel that we should enjoy beauty of flowers and we should not pluck them at any cost.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
17 Jun 16
But what would you give your wife?
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@dpk262006 (56170)
• Delhi, India
17 Jun 16
@sol_cee - Of course, bunch of roses. I love roses and on special occasions like birthday or anniversary, I prefer to present her a bouquet of roses. something like this in image. Image courtesy - www.queenbeeflowershop.com
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@SIMPLYD (79762)
• Philippines
14 Jun 16
I wasn't able to guess it until the end . I guess had you mentioned something about it's colors i might have . You are good in writing poems , my friend . Keep it up.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
14 Jun 16
I'm selfish with clues this time, feisty rebel woman. lol
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@SIMPLYD (79762)
• Philippines
14 Jun 16
@sol_cee I can see that .
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@Claire_ut (223)
• United States
12 Jun 16
Awwwwwwwwwwwww,that is so so so sweet!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Thanks for the awwwwww lol
www.
• United States
12 Jun 16
@sol_cee You are welcome.
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@zarlamain (24525)
• United States
10 Jun 16
Very lovely!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
Thanks Zarla for the nice adjective.
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@zarlamain (24525)
• United States
10 Jun 16
@sol_cee Your welcome!
@JustBhem (37513)
• Davao, Philippines
10 Jun 16
is it because of the rainy night you are sentimental?
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
Or I'm just OA. lol
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@JustBhem (37513)
• Davao, Philippines
10 Jun 16
@sol_cee Or missing someone? lol
@acelawrites (10989)
• Philippines
14 Jun 16
Very creative poem, all along I thought it is human or someone you love that stood near you!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
14 Jun 16
Even roses have love life. lol
@paigea (22198)
• Canada
13 Jun 16
Very good poem. I did need the explanation at the bottom
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
Oh yeah. The Rose' perspective is deemed important.
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@jobelbojel (7179)
• Philippines
12 Jun 16
Nicely done. Thank you for putting that hint at the end of this lovely poem.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
Hey long time no see!
@kaka135 (14099)
• Malaysia
12 Jun 16
A lovely and sad poem. I never thought it's written for the rose. It's really nice!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
Thanks for the kind words Lee.
@gr8nana6 (2194)
• United States
11 Jun 16
Very captivating until the end, beautifully written!
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
12 Jun 16
Thanks for the kind words.
@just4him (117368)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
11 Jun 16
Beautiful poem about the plucked rose.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
13 Jun 16
Everything is plucked nowadays.
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@thelme55 (14574)
• Germany
10 Jun 16
Beautiful! I love it.
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@sol_cee (15542)
• Saint Vincent And The Grenadines
10 Jun 16
Thanks Thelma-san!
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