Which Way do I Go? (A Poem)

@zebra2222 (4889)
United States
August 17, 2016 7:02pm CST
Jack was confused. He had lost his way. He didn't want to wander lost For the entire day. Should I go to the left? Should I go to the right? Jack was having An internal fight. Jack had a date With Jill today. They were going to meet At Water Pail Bay. Jack finally met A guy with directions. "Go South down Rhyme's Street For your protection. There you will stir clear Of the evil Queen of Hearts. I can tell you will do this Cause you are very smart. Finally turn left pass Mother Hubbard's House. There you will see a crooked mouse. Walk three blocks forward and do not stray. You'll find your way to Water Pail Bay. Have fun with your date, dear, sweet Jill, But don't go climbing up any dangerous hill.
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@Happy2BeMe (70791)
• Canada
18 Aug 16
Good job! But poor Jack did go up that hill and we know what happened lol I really enjoy your poems. They make me smile.
@zebra2222 (4889)
• United States
18 Aug 16
I enjoy writing poems with a humorous twist.
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@Happy2BeMe (70791)
• Canada
18 Aug 16
@zebra2222 well you are very good at it.
@franxav (3855)
20 Aug 16
What happened to Jack's broken crown? Is he in a hospital still? Has he got married to his beloved? Hasn't he got children and grandchildren? I'm just curious to know!
@jaboUK (51450)
• United Kingdom
18 Aug 16
Great poem, you made me laugh.