In honor of the season - The Swing

United States
October 4, 2016 7:39am CST
Something happened, and it was terrible. Something I try not to think about, but I remember every detail. I especially remember the swing. Pull up a chair and I will tell you about the day I would prefer to forget. The Henderson's, Lenny and his wife Belinda, has just moved into the neighborhood May of 1983. They seemed to be a lovely couple and were totally devoted to their 16 year old son, Carmen. We now know that the picture they painted for the world to see was far from the dark world they lived in. The newcomers to the small town waived, smiled and made pleasant conversation with anyone they came in contact with. They put out a beautiful doormat and hung a brand new porch swing. They made themselves at home in our small town. At some point in time they began retreating more and more inward until they only left their house for quick trips to unknown destinations. They avoided contact with the neighbors. They hid inside, away from everyone. We thought that they were frugal as they kept the house very dark. Only one small lamp could be seen through the tiny attic window, Carmen's room. Some folks said they heard moans, screams and other noises coming from the house, from the attic. Rumors and gossip flowed freely. It became an obsession with some of the neighbors to find out what was happening inside the house. Some tried to snoop, without much success. One evening late in the summer Lenny and Belinda were on their front porch, which was a rare occurrence. Not only were they outside, but they settled down on the swing and we could hear the soft moan of the chains as the swing moved back and forth, back and forth. It was just about dark and I gave up spying on them and headed to our bedroom. I was feeling rather content, after all, the neighborhood seemed quiet and peaceful. I assumed that whatever dilemma the Henderson's had been facing was over and they were back to normal. The next morning I looked out the bedroom window, which had a clear view of the Henderson's swing. My voice wanted to scream, but nothing came out. What I saw on the swing was almost too horrible to describe to you.... Lenny's legs and arms had been torn from his body. Belinda's head had been cut off and was sitting on the swing between the two mutilated bodies. Blood was everywhere. I was transfixed, wide eyed and in total disbelief. My husband Sam came running over to see what I was staring out. He immediately ran to the phone to call the police. We knew it was too late for those two, but what if Carmen was still alive and needed help. As the sirens were nearing and the flashing lights could been seen on the patrol car the mystery ended. Carmen appeared, almost from nowhere, very much alive. Before my brain could process that, I saw the knife blade glistening in the sun. The knife was covered with blood, his parents' blood. Carmen's clothes were blood red from his shirt to his sneakers. The police yelled to him to put down the knife as Carmen approached the swing. In one swift motion he pushed the bodies off of the swing and he sat down. He picked up his mother's head and said, "This one is for you Mother", as he plunged the knife deep into his own heart and the scream he made was deafening. Then it was quiet, very quiet as blood poured from Carmen and the evil ended. During their investigation the police found medical records showing that Carmen had severe mental problems his entire life. He hated his parents and blamed them for bringing him into the world. Although he was under the care of a medical team they did not feel that he was dangerous to himself or to others. Unfortunately they were wrong. I cannot stand to look at a swing because it triggers the memories of that scene. The house was eventually boarded up. The wonderful little neighborhood changed forever. We thought about moving but we didn't want to give up our home that we loved so much. To this day I get chills thinking back to what happened. Wait, what do I see across the street? Is that a new couple moving in? They have a son. Yes, and they are putting out a new doormat and....oh no, no, no. Not that please, don't do it - don't hang up the swing Note: I wrote this several years ago for a now defunct site. I thought since Halloween is approaching it would be appropriate to share it with you. Photo: pixabay.com/en/porch-swing-green-white-summer-610654/
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@LadyDuck (460669)
• Switzerland
4 Oct 16
I think to remember that I have already read this story, but I had pleasure to read it again. This is the right month for creepy stories.
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@LadyDuck (460669)
• Switzerland
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill I love so much horror stories, this is a good one.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
@LadyDuck Thanks, I have a few more I'll have to put out there one day.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
I am pretty sure you did read it before, and thanks for reading it again.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
Oh I was in like Flynn from the beginning! Creepy story!!! Perfect for the season!
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• United States
4 Oct 16
Thanks...I keep saying I have a good imagination LOL
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• United States
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill You certainly do!
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@SIMPLYD (90722)
• Philippines
5 Oct 16
That is a very nice novel , my friend . You are a good writer . It made me read until the end . So tragic ,
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• United States
5 Oct 16
Thanks, I appreciate the kind words.
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@marlina (154165)
• Canada
4 Oct 16
OMG, yes you are good! All along, I thought it really happened in your neighborhood. What a story.
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@jennyjoy (1961)
• Bangalore, India
5 Oct 16
So did I.
@Butchcass4 (5895)
• United States
4 Oct 16
That is a very sad event. I'm sorry you had to see something so evil and horrible. I hope some day you can put it behind you with God's help. He heals the broken hearted and binds up their wounds.
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• United States
5 Oct 16
Thank you but it was a story, I made it up, it didn't happen.
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• United States
5 Oct 16
@Butchcass4 LOL, I must be good.
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• United States
5 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill Oh thank God it was just a story. Wow blew my mind LOL
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@andriaperry (116860)
• Anniston, Alabama
4 Oct 16
Is this real?
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• United States
4 Oct 16
No.....you thought it was real? I must be darn good.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
@andriaperry You can't see it but i'm blushing LOL
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@andriaperry (116860)
• Anniston, Alabama
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill LOL, I know people this disturbed! Yes you`re that good.
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@celticeagle (160064)
• Boise, Idaho
4 Oct 16
Great story! I seem to know you too well for I wondered while reading it when you would say that Carmen was just fixing these for Halloween decorations or something like that. Mesmerizing.
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@celticeagle (160064)
• Boise, Idaho
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill ....Yes, enjoyed it a lot. It was a little long but kept my interest so not a problem.
• United States
4 Oct 16
I could have gone that way with the ending....thanks for reading, I know it's long.
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• United States
5 Oct 16
@celticeagle Thanks again.
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@BelleStarr (61047)
• United States
4 Oct 16
Wow great short story, gave me the chills.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
thanks, I appreciate that.
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@LeaPea2417 (36602)
• Toccoa, Georgia
4 Oct 16
Wow, that is scary and creepy! At first when I started reading it, I almost thought it had really happened to you and you had really witnessed that. I am glad it was just a story. You did write the story well!
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• United States
4 Oct 16
My goal was to make it sound real...glad you liked it.
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@PatZAnthony (14752)
• Charlotte, North Carolina
5 Oct 16
This is good enough to be expanded into an even better book. Go for it!
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• United States
5 Oct 16
Thanks Pat. I sometime think about that, but not sure if I could.
@Drosophila (16573)
• Ireland
4 Oct 16
this is very chilling.. I hope not real
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• United States
4 Oct 16
No not real...it all came out of this old lady's head LOL
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• United States
4 Oct 16
@Drosophila That's ok, sounds like something I can leave alone LOL
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@Drosophila (16573)
• Ireland
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill It's very halloween.. and apparently there's a list of familicides in USA somewhere on the webs.. very chilling
@sueznewz2 (10409)
• Alicante, Spain
4 Oct 16
O M G .... you had me hook line and sinker ...from the begining...I was feeling sorry for you and that family.... until the last paragraph ...then I realised it was a Halloween story... such a good story ,..could be a movie,... well done great story telling...
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• United States
4 Oct 16
Oh my, thank you very much - Maybe I should call Hollywood and ask if someone wants the script LOL
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@JudyEv (326895)
• Rockingham, Australia
4 Oct 16
It is certainly appropriate for Halloween.
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• United States
4 Oct 16
Yes, I wrote it on Halloween several years ago.
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@thelme55 (76533)
• Germany
5 Oct 16
Oh my God Abby! I thought it really happened to you. I am glad it was just a story. Creepy but well done.
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• United States
5 Oct 16
Thanks, I wanted people to think it was real.
@1creekgirl (40656)
• United States
4 Oct 16
So, this didn't really happen, right? Either way, it was excellent!
• United States
5 Oct 16
No, it all came from my vivid imagination.
@HazySue (39264)
• Gouverneur, New York
4 Oct 16
Wow You had me going. What a story. So creepy. Terrific job. I was thinking it was real.
• United States
4 Oct 16
I wanted you to think it was real.
@HazySue (39264)
• Gouverneur, New York
4 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill you succeeded.
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@RubyHawk (99421)
• Atlanta, Georgia
5 Oct 16
That is a neat story, you had me fooled for a little while. I wrote a story some time ago I called Doris's Baby. I think I posted it on Triond and now it's gone forever. I wish I had kept a copy.
• United States
5 Oct 16
I wrote several horror stories and those are the only ones I saved from Bubbles.
@teenspirit (1597)
• Israel
5 Oct 16
so creepy!
• United States
5 Oct 16
Good, it was supposed to be creepy thanks.
• United States
5 Oct 16
@teenspirit Then I did my job LOL
• Israel
5 Oct 16
@AbbyGreenhill haha thats right
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@RitzzView (2994)
• India
5 Oct 16
I must say the way you put your words is in such a well systematic order it gives clear idea and details that we need to know. Oh God! That experience would have been so terrific! I didn't know such mental disorder could turn to this much of an act! Hope, no one gets to experience such things..or even see such things!
@jennyjoy (1961)
• Bangalore, India
5 Oct 16
I couldn't stop reading ,though I hate horror stories. Your Good!
• United States
5 Oct 16
Thank you, I like writing them.
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