@jaboUK I get that Jabo! See I wrote that it doesn't follow the traditional haiku rules? It's more of a two liner, yes, but I have come across many social pages who write haiku without bothering about the syllables. Maybe it's not justified okay. But they do. So, I just tried my hand in it. But perhaps I should stop calling them haiku and just name them two-liners eh?
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@The_Bong_Woman I think that would be best. Calling yours a haiku is like saying that an apple is a pear It's the same as some people calling 4-liners 'limericks', which they clearly are not. Anyway, I was distracted from saying that your 2-liner is very good.