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My father was a Journalist.So in very early age i too fell in love with writing and reading.I don't know whether i possess the natural talent for writing or not yet i aspire to be as appealing as my father was.During my college days when i was away from home i used to write him and my father besides knowing how i was doing never missed to point out the mistakes in my language if there were any.Today he is not around to correct me or appreciate me yet i always strive to refine myself learning from those i assess very highly.I shall be really very grateful if some of you can give me their frank opinion or suggestion about my language by troubling to browse back which i posted in @mylot so far.