NO LOOKING BACK.

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@Kandae11 (53679)
April 13, 2017 9:08am CST
Do you have a habit which isn't doing you any good and you would like to be rid of? I had this bad habit of putting off for tomorrow what could be done today. Thankfully something happened to get me out of it and two years ago when I reflected on the strides I have made since losing that habit I thought of writing this poem. I hope you like it. Under a cool, still, starry night; About four hours before daylight. A beautiful horse raced with great speed; Barbary was indeed a magnificent steed. Galloping across the desert sands; Precious cargo grasping his mane with both hands. Race they must, or end up dead; Destination still three miles ahead. Thundering behind, a mere hundred yards away; Come a band of robbers whose intent is not to play. Can Barbary outrun those bent on doing harm? Will he reach their destination and raise an alarm? Barbary is a determined , confident horse; He knows he must get there at whatever cost. Months of hope and planning could go down the drain; The two may never get the chance to rise again. In our journey through life we sometimes get slow and lazy; Good things lie ahead - but we are distracted and hazy. Sometimes a boost is needed to get us back on track; Unpleasant it may be, but we know there is no looking back. A Kandase original. Poem published in Bubblews in 2015
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@JudyEv (325854)
• Rockingham, Australia
13 Apr 17
Thanks for sharing your poem. I used to put things off too but I am much better now at getting things done on time. Sometimes even ahead of time!
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Great! That is the way I try to be now - doing things ahead of time.
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@vandana7 (98834)
• India
13 Apr 17
Nice poem. :) Nice image, and nice thought. I have plenty of flaws. Putting off for tomorrow happens because of others in my case. I no longer get annoyed about it makes me wonder what is wrong with me. lol
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Sometimes we need something to really shake us up a bit.
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@vandana7 (98834)
• India
13 Apr 17
@Kandae11 .. How true..lol
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@vandana7 (98834)
• India
13 Apr 17
@HAPPSINGH .. Today is over and you are asking now? Shame on you..lol.
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@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
14 Apr 17
pretty good as poetry goes. have you published elsewhere? i usually am not big on poetry these days so it may be even better then i think
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@bunnybon7 (50973)
• Holiday, Florida
14 Apr 17
@Kandae11 marvelous. i hope it is well recieved by many, many people
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
@bunnybon7 Thank you.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
Thanks. I am working on a book which I plan to self publish.
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@Shavkat (137213)
• Philippines
13 Apr 17
I used to be in this situation before. But I need to change into a new leaf. Great poem, my friend.
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@Shavkat (137213)
• Philippines
13 Apr 17
@Kandae11 I agree. We can't go back from the old ways. If we do, it is a sign of immaturity,
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Thank you. Life is short - and time goes faster every year.
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@jstory07 (134477)
• Roseburg, Oregon
13 Apr 17
Everyone likes to put off tomorrow what they figure they can do the next day and next day. I like what you wrote it is so true.
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@jstory07 (134477)
• Roseburg, Oregon
15 Apr 17
@Kandae11 It sure is real life.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Thank you - it is real life.
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@FayeHazel (40248)
• United States
13 Apr 17
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing. I too have issues with procrastination..... my mom even got me a clock that says "now" for all of the numbers lol
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@FayeHazel (40248)
• United States
14 Apr 17
@Kandae11 That is impressive!
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
I was convinced that it is not the best habit to have so I have got rid of it - but being human I may fall by the wayside - but very infrequently.
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@allknowing (130064)
• India
13 Apr 17
I know the joy I get when I do not procrastinate. I am disciplining myself in this area. Great poem.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
It can be a relief when you don't, especially when you see what can be achieved.
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@Freelanzer (10745)
• Canada
13 Apr 17
Beautiful poem. My bad habit is a reluctance to get out and do my daily walk
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
That is a habit of quite a few people.
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@PainsOnSlate (21854)
• Canada
14 Apr 17
I loved it. you did a great job on it. The horse is a beautiful beast and a perfect metaphor for life. The phrase "no looking back" is a good though to use through your whole life.
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• Canada
14 Apr 17
@Kandae11 You are so right!
@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
I am happy that you love it. In life we should try not to let negativity and obstacles hold us back from achieving what we are truly capable of achieving.
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@DianneN (246906)
• United States
14 Apr 17
That's a lovely poem! I've always forged ahead. That's why I haven't had much time for myLot lately.
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@DianneN (246906)
• United States
14 Apr 17
@Kandae11 Thanks so much. Hugs!
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
Well, you have been missed.
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@just4him (306386)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Apr 17
Very good poem. I'm glad you were able to break that bad habit. I am still prone to that one.
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@just4him (306386)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
15 Apr 17
@Kandae11 Something worth doing is never easy.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
15 Apr 17
@just4him True.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
Thanks, I try my best to keep up - of course, it isn't always easy.
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@shivamani10 (11038)
• Hyderabad, India
13 Apr 17
oh..very good and interesting one...How could get the inspiration?
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Thanks. Success at something or the other usually inspires.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
13 Apr 17
Inspiration comes from many things.
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@RubyHawk (99425)
• Atlanta, Georgia
14 Apr 17
You are right on the money. It's best to stay on track. It makes life easier.
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@RubyHawk (99425)
• Atlanta, Georgia
27 May 17
@Kandae11 Here I am again. I read your discussion about your favorite and here I see I've been here before It's a poem to make you think.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
27 May 17
@RubyHawk Your second visit.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
It certainly does.
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@responsiveme (22926)
• India
18 Apr 17
good poem I'm guilty of that too...in future I'll think of Barbary
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• India
19 Apr 17
@Kandae11 I will;
@Kandae11 (53679)
18 Apr 17
You do that.
@crossbones27 (48434)
• Mojave, California
26 May 17
You are right and see why that is your favorite. So much truth to it and very well written. Great job.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
26 May 17
Thank you kind Sir.
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@BelleStarr (61047)
• United States
15 Apr 17
A very good poem and no that is not my weakness I am pretty forward looking and not a procrastinator either.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
15 Apr 17
That is great.
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@marlina (154166)
• Canada
15 Apr 17
Thanks for this lovely writing.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
15 Apr 17
Thank you for reading.
• Eugene, Oregon
26 May 17
My wife and I laugh at my habit of of saying "Domani" to many larger tasks that may or may not get done tomorrow.
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@Kandae11 (53679)
26 May 17
What is the meaning of "Domani" ?
@ridingbet (66857)
• Philippines
15 Apr 17
nice piece of poetry. for me, i sometimes look back but now, without remorse. there is a learning after all
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@Kandae11 (53679)
15 Apr 17
It is good when one can do that.
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@Mass_Sonu (1021)
• India
14 Apr 17
@Kandae11 That's such a wonderful & inspiring poem
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@Kandae11 (53679)
14 Apr 17
I am glad you think so.
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