APoem on Life

@Imperfet (130)
May 30, 2017 5:57pm CST
Life is a journey , A journey that never ends ; That changes it colour at any moment ,at any moment it bends ; ) So that's it , wrote it by heart hope you like it , and ya , wanted to ask "I always wanted to be a poet in future , do you think I can be?"
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Lenore Plassman
@sallypup (57876)
• Centralia, Washington
3 Jun 17
Curious me wants to know what country you are from? Can you give me a detail on how life is a journey? A detail that is uniquely you and no one else? What causes the changes to color?
Sameera zia
@Imperfet (130)
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3 Jun 17
Life is compared to a journey because it is full of difficulties just as a journey or voyage , and the colours refers to different moods ,situations and feeling so , it keeps changing its colours means it is not like you will always be happy or always be sad the life will keep changing its colours
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Lenore Plassman
@sallypup (57876)
• Centralia, Washington
3 Jun 17
@Imperfet Sounds good. I meant that you could flesh out the poem by giving a unique to you detail or two. I promise I am not being mean. Just suggesting.
Sameera zia
@Imperfet (130)
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3 Jun 17
@sallypup well , what do you mean by flesh out?
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Mike Page
@magnumopus (1647)
• Singapore
30 May 17
Everyone I think is a natural poet in their own heart.
Sameera zia
@Imperfet (130)
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30 May 17
Yeah you are right
Nawsheen
@Nawsheen (28644)
• Mauritius
31 May 17
You are right life is journey full of surprises, twists and bends. I appreciated those words you wrote. You can be a poet if you want to. Maybe writing on mylot would be a great start :)
Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (306239)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
31 May 17
You have potential.
Evanson Muhungi
@EMuhungi (1712)
• Nairobi, Kenya
30 May 17
You can be all that you wanna be. Welcome to mylot.
samaira drew
@fragranceofeast (17)
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31 May 17
your words are really touching