The one that started it.

@Lucky15 (37346)
Philippines
September 22, 2017 7:03am CST
Felt it, then inspired. When I was in high school, we are asked to look for a poem that we "feel" and interpret it on our own words. Into the our school library we check books where we can see an "inspiring" piece. It didn't took me that long to find one, or maybe poems is not really my "type", just wrote it down for compliance. While reading the poem, I felt what was written there, that even until now I still feel that every time I read the poem. It is about slavery and hopelessness, unfairness. The poem is "the man with the hoe" by Edwin Markham. It was the start of liking poems. Do you have that thing called, "the one that started it"? Here are few lines of the poem: "Bowed by the weight of centuries he leans Upon his hoe and gazes on the ground, The emptiness of ages in his face, And on his back the burden of the world. Who made him dead to rapture and despair, A thing that grieves not and that never hopes."
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@YrNemo (20261)
23 Sep 17
I am hopeless with remembering anything, unless it is in song form, like "The Rose' Some say,"Love, it is a river That drowns the tender reed" Some say, "Love, it is a razor That leaves your soul to bleed"
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
I know this one, I think it was sung by westlife, revived the song :D
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
@YrNemo Oh yes, bette middler too. You know, my teens were spent with boybands, haha
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@YrNemo (20261)
23 Sep 17
@Lucky15 I will go searching for it. That song was sung by many artists, Bette Middler is one. (Westlife version is very good. Thanks for that. )
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
22 Sep 17
It sounds like a sad poem for me. Yes, when the ex-wrote me a lot of poems before as a requirement for his subject. He wrote a lot of it and that's how I began to like poems and make one (but I don't know if I did)
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@sol_cee (38223)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
@JustBhem My Lovely Lady.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
It is Bhem. it brings a memory? :D
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@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
23 Sep 17
@Lucky15 It does, I will have his poem of me share here one day. My ex is @sol_cee best friend, she knows about it.
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@hereandthere (45651)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
it's a sad poem. i looked it up to learn more about it. per wikipedia: "It portrays the labor of much of humanity using the symbolism of a laborer leaning upon his hoe, burdened by his work, but receiving little rest or reward. It has been called "the battle-cry of the next thousand years" and translated into 37 languages." i guess it represents the common working man, which most people around the world are.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
It is :(
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@Tampa_girl7 (48997)
• United States
22 Sep 17
I love poetry, but have not seen this poem before.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
The poem is not that much of popularity like that of Edgar allan poe ;)
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@acelawrites (19273)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
Oh, I also remember those lines, and also loved it! Yes, I also started composing some poetic lines in high school.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
It was just this past two years that i started writing, and has those sad themes, never thought that i have it, haha
• Nairobi, Kenya
23 Sep 17
I used to recite poems in high-school and primary school :)
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
Oh, i remember those days, lol
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
@mildredtabitha You did? wow! English and Tagalog only ;/
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• Nairobi, Kenya
23 Sep 17
@Lucky15 I used to recite poems in English, French and Swahili. What about you?
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@allen0187 (58444)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
First time I've heard of this poem. Will look up the rest of it online.
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@allen0187 (58444)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
23 Sep 17
Oh, you can check the whole poem, glad that we are not asked to memorize it, lol
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@prashu228 (37526)
• India
22 Sep 17
It's a good poem. Never heard about it
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
Thanks :)
@amadeo (111948)
• United States
22 Sep 17
It has been awhile there poetry I like.Also Quotes.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
Same here sir Fred :)
@shshiju (10342)
• Cochin, India
22 Sep 17
Find Beautiful element in sadness and hardworking. Its a good poem
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@shshiju (10342)
• Cochin, India
23 Sep 17
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
22 Sep 17
It is one sad poem right? :(
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@DianneN (246874)
• United States
24 Sep 17
That's a great poem for analyzing. I love poetry and have taught my students how to read and analyze poems. The same technique can be used with songs.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
Oh, speaking of songs, i do like Jason Mraz and Jack Johnson's. both have this poetic lyric that always makes my analyze what do they mean
@ridingbet (66857)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
i can memorize the first 2 lines only. hahaha! but i like that piece of poetry.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
You were asked too before? :D
@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
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@ridingbet (66857)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
@Lucky15 no, but we were required to memorize the first stanza of "mi ultimo adios", "the tree", and the Spanish prayers of "Padre Nuestro" and "Dios de Salve Maria".
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@thelme55 (76476)
• Germany
24 Sep 17
I love that poem. I have memorised that poem when I was still in school. I love poetry and I sometimes wrote a poem, usually when I was sad. I don't know why.
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
24 Sep 17
What? hahaha. you did?
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@thelme55 (76476)
• Germany
25 Sep 17
@Lucky15 yes, I did but already forgotten this poem until you wrote about it.
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