Original story for Bollywood film...

@vandana7 (98830)
India
October 27, 2017 11:59am CST
So ..Maarandrun Moody government decides to reduce crimes in the country and insists that people have their DNA samples linked to Adhaar cards. To bring down terrorism, the Indian researchers for a change, develop bullets that have chip in them that can hold DNA code, and can read the DNA of the persons around them. The object was to release those bullets anywhere with the program, and the bullet would run about searching for the evil man and get straight into his or her heart. Even if the person is sleeping, bathing, and it could travel up from drain pipes, and those holes in the wash basins and in showers..for once Indians too could be geniuses. But little did those geniuses realize that the ultimate weapon could also eliminate enemies. People became ultra polite with others, no more fighting bickering, back biting, etc. And the mode of protection was...guess what...Ammonia. Only Ammonia could confuse that damn bullet, and ruin its circuit. Now Vanny wonders whether human beings would prefer to be killed or wear Ammonia. If they wear Ammonia, it is a dead give away of their having done something wrong. If not, they risk being killed by the bullet from god knows where. In any event, Ammonia is a stinking gas... So...what would you do, wear Ammonia, or let the bullet win...there does not seem to be third alternative for me...I have too many enemies already.
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9 responses
@MALUSE (69413)
• Germany
27 Oct 17
Methinks someone has read too many sci-fi novels. :-)
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
28 Oct 17
Who knows, I could become famous posthumously for having come up with the idea. :)
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@suripunj (956)
• New Delhi, India
27 Oct 17
Ammonia is no longer NH3 after GST it has assumed black color,these days flowing in Gujrat(where election is due in few weeks)
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
28 Oct 17
I am so confused about who is saying what, who is in power, who is in temples, who is in RSS. Why can't people just keep quiet and stop provoking others into some act.
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@suripunj (956)
• New Delhi, India
28 Oct 17
@vandana7 Start blame game now!It is your 60 years rule since Independence,communal-ism,my Taj your Taj economy booming never seen inequality to such extreme...
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• Eugene, Oregon
30 Oct 17
Since I am an innocent, I have no need to fear.
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
30 Oct 17
There must be somebody envious of you. Even that person can resort to such things, you know...
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
30 Oct 17
@JamesHxstatic I am afraid so...life is weird..lol
• Eugene, Oregon
30 Oct 17
@vandana7 Ohhh, there is that possibility.
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@Daljinder (23233)
• Bangalore, India
27 Oct 17
I am going to get some popcorns for this!
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
28 Oct 17
Did you notice Maar and run Moody? I wouldn't even have Narendera as name for my fiction work. You see, it reads as Nar end era...meaning man end this era...nuke it all..sigh. With what is happening at Doklam and Pak border...I have reasons to be concerned.
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
28 Oct 17
@Daljinder ...And it is young Hindus ..in the name of Hindutva. Sigh...as if we did not have enough Owaisis and what nots. The guys are not getting it in their nut.....apparently that in about 12 years from now rivers would have shrunk to half their sizes...just because we do not have enough place to accommodate burgeoning population ...and grow food for them. Leaders such as Modi instead of linking rivers are building bullet trains and Statues. Shame.
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@Daljinder (23233)
• Bangalore, India
28 Oct 17
@vandana7 It was a long time coming. Pakistan needs to be dealt with. No appeasement anymore. There is a limit to one's patience and Pakistan has used all of India's patience. Now considering, China, Modi has extended a hand of friendship towards the country (which he has also done to Pakistan and was rewarded by Uri attacks) and now future will tell what shape Indo-China relationship will take.
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@YrNemo (20261)
29 Oct 17
wow, The Indian government has something that could teach the KGB, CIA and MI5, MI6 etc a few things... I am impressed.
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
2 Jan 18
Wouldn't it be great? Even I thought so...
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@YrNemo (20261)
2 Jan 18
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• New Delhi, India
6 Jan 18
Does Amonia has power to kill tiger?
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
7 Jan 18
I think once we wear ammonia, tiger may sniff it and feel, ah well, it is exactly like what I release so it is likely that this person is my kin and I don't kill kins. Chances are tigers would be friendly ..want to find out? I can arrange for ammonia for you to wear you know...and even arrange to let you live a day in tiger's cell somewhere.
• New Delhi, India
7 Jan 18
@vandana7 Jim Corbett or Zoo in Delhi? Arrange a beautiful date with tigresse
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@mayka123 (16584)
• India
2 Jan 18
You could join Bollywood as a story writer. I think you come come up with some good stories for Shahrukh Khan and Rajnikant !!!
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@mayka123 (16584)
• India
12 Aug 18
@vandana7 did you finally give your dna samples to Moody ?
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
2 Jan 18
Yeah..martial arts would become outdated with this..so much petrol could be saved running around searching for the criminal when all that police would have to do is, feed the DNA code into bullet and release it.
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@ptrikha_2 (45483)
• India
26 Nov 17
Oh please please .. let me work on helping you develop the story. I can add suspense and action, and you can direct the movie. People like our dear @TheHorse and DaddyEvil(DE) can provide generous venture funding. And by the way there is no harm in day dreaming.... As for my credentials: one of my sent stories got published on a decent site : twodropsofink
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
2 Jan 18
Be my guest...I have no issues if you do something like that..but Ammonia...sigh.
@TheHorse (205772)
• Walnut Creek, California
26 Nov 17
This is way too cerebral for me. Who is shooting whom?
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@vandana7 (98830)
• India
2 Jan 18
LOL...it is just a hypothetical bullet that can kill people based on DNA code loaded into it.
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@TheHorse (205772)
• Walnut Creek, California
2 Jan 18
@vandana7 Hmm. I've fantasized computers, cell phones, and bicycles that squirt radioactive liquid on thieves so they easily be tracked down.
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