Colder Than Ice.....
By Sue21
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
Pamplona, Spain
June 14, 2018 5:13am CST
She took his hand and she felt it cold
Colder than ice and a distant air
I care not to marry you and in my heart you are not here
Was the message he gave out in his eyes
His look was for another that was there
She trembled and shook with fear
She held her head high and looked him in the face
Looking to find where was her place
Colder than ice that it cut the very ambience
She would later on know true love in a different place
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@Jessabuma (31700)
• Baguio, Philippines
14 Jun 18
Wow! This is so nice.. I enjoyed reading it.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Jun 18
Thank you its about a scene I saw in a Film she might as well have married the Fridge instead.
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@Jessabuma (31700)
• Baguio, Philippines
14 Jun 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 that's nice..
You're welcome
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Jun 18
@Jessabuma
I can think of a million things better than him makes me shudder just to think of marrying someone with that way of being.
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@mlgen1037 (29886)
• Manila, Philippines
14 Jun 18
I really like how you make your poems. This one gave me the chills. 
I have not watched that Braveheart movie though.
I have not watched that Braveheart movie though.1 person likes this
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Jun 18
Having to watch it is a must as its part of the past although obviously some of it is fiction as well.
But Wallace did have a wife and she was murdered so cruelly.
All in all its just great to watch and see it for how it is.
I cannot write like that all the time and its always on the spur of the moment that it gets me to write and write and today is one of those days.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Jun 18
@mlgen1037
Aye, he did an excellent job he really did a Scots accent is mighty hard to speak specially with the inflections in the voice and I can speak like that if I wish to but don´t usually out of respect.
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@mlgen1037 (29886)
• Manila, Philippines
15 Jun 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 I feel the same way when I write my discussions and when it comes to the mind, we immediately need to write it or else, it was just an idea or a topic in our heads. I will check that movie. Looks like Mel Gibson did a good job there.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Jun 18
Yes I did and its most heartfelt when I do write things like that.
I love the Film also.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
16 Jun 18
@DianneN
Thank you very much I cannot put these things I write in many places really.
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Jun 18
Thank you I love writing these kind of ones they come out on the spur of the moment.
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@just4him (308119)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
15 Jun 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 Those are the best kind.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Jun 18
Its heartfelt as I would never marry someone like that but she was in those times you had to marry or else.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
14 Jun 18
Aww. If the love fits wear it, if it don't then wear it off. Definitely they'll be another lovely t-shirt out there that will surely fit. lol. Beautiful poem by the way.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Jun 18
Thank you and i love that view of yours as well.
If there is a t-shirt that fits.
Great one for sure.
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