Okay (A Poem)

@zebra2222 (5269)
United States
June 30, 2018 11:46pm CST
Okay, you can do it. Okay, go right ahead. Okay, get married. You wish I were dead. Okay, you don't want my advice. Okay, don't even ask. But if you're looking for a loan, I'm a little short on cash. Okay, don't worry. Debt isn't so bad. Okay, now you are crying. You're feeling so sad. Okay, can be misleading. It conveys different things. It's like seeing a bird flying With only one wing.
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4 responses
cherigucchi
@cherigucchi (14879)
• Philippines
1 Jul 18
The poem is more than OKAY to me. Simple but meaningful.
Steve West
@zebra2222 (5269)
• United States
1 Jul 18
Sometimes the simplest poems are the most meaningful. Thanks for the compliment.
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huang
@huangw (10)
• Hangzhou, China
1 Jul 18
Wonderful poem! Thanks a lot for sharing. And we hope to read more exciting poems written by you in the future.
rakski
@rakski (112925)
• Philippines
1 Jul 18
It seems you are not feeling okay when you wrote this. Am I right?
Jessa Bumagat
@Jessabuma (31700)
• Baguio, Philippines
1 Jul 18
Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.. thanks for sharing..