Alcohol Poem

@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
July 25, 2018 6:44am CST
Just gibberish I think You’ll read between my winks I’m counting stars Maybe you won’t see the links I’m far from earth, I am in Mars The horse just kicks me hard Can’t ran another yard Played with my brain I’ve lost my guard The world is not the same The spirit of the bottle Let my ink shout in full throttle I am in a different place Because of this polluted water I’m flying wingless in the outer space… 7/26/2018 Thanks to the Red Horse Beer. Without it, the poem is not possible… ha ha… When was the last time you get drunk? How is it like?
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@MissNikki (5237)
• Maple Ridge, British Columbia
19 Mar 19
I am a little bit tipsy at the moment, I can't lie. And I enjoy your post. LoL
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@MissNikki (5237)
• Maple Ridge, British Columbia
20 Mar 19
@simplfred Oh I probably did miss letters, I just went back and checked my spelling to make sure I did not appear intoxicated. LoL
@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
19 Mar 19
At least you can still type without missing a letter... Ha ha... Cool...
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
25 Jul 18
Nice poem but i haven’t been drunk
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
25 Jul 18
Thank you... hik...
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@Lucky15 (37346)
• Philippines
25 Jul 18
@simplfred hahahaha.
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• United States
26 Jul 18
Good poem, not good reason for writing it!! Stay safe.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jul 18
Thanks.
25 Jul 18
I don't get drunk whenever I drink. I stop whenever I feel tipsy. And I will just look for a coffee or something to eat to be sober. Because for sure I nees to drive afterwards
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
25 Jul 18
That's great my friend. I'm glad you know your limitations.
@Sojourn (13836)
• India
25 Jul 18
You have drunken talents
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
25 Jul 18
Ha ha... I thinks so. Thank you.
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@Ladanger (14582)
• United States
26 Jul 18
That's a interesting poem. I have not drank in months I use to drink a lot before
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
26 Jul 18
Thank you, my friend.
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@deba12 (2951)
• India
25 Jul 18
The poem is wonderful. Try to get it published somewhere. Were you drunk while writing?
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