Lunch Bag (A Poem)
By Steve West
@zebra2222 (5269)
United States
October 28, 2018 8:55pm CST
I have a lunch bag in my hand.
I also have a bag of sand.
Now sand doesn't belong
In my lunch bag.
Sand has a grainy taste.
Oh please don't put sand in my lunch bag.
It would be a terrible disgrace.
Put a sandwich in my lunch bag
Or perhaps some nuts and treats.
Just keep the sand away from my lunch bag.
I simply will not eat.
Now sand goes in a sand box.
That's a perfect place for it to go.
I said not to put sand in my lunch bag.
I repeat: No! No! No!
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6 responses
@RasmaSandra (73444)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
29 Oct 18
Delightful and creative poem.
1 person likes this
@zebra2222 (5269)
• United States
29 Oct 18
This poem was meant to be light and whimsical. Glad you liked it.
2 people like this
@Michellekidwell (29260)
• Sonora, California
29 Oct 18
Love the whimsy of this one!
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
29 Oct 18
had a few beach picnics ruined by sand in the food - great poem
@Teep11 (7674)
• United States
29 Oct 18
Wouldn't want any sand in my lung bag or in any bag. Imagine having sand in the bags oh gosh would cause some distress having to carry sand in a bag or bags. A great lunch would certainly be a delight. Perhaps there should be more having some lunch at their favorite restaurant.
@jstory07 (134465)
• Roseburg, Oregon
29 Oct 18
NO NO NO.
Sand would be bad for a lunch bag
Sand would be good for a sand box
YES YES YES
