Your LIFE is too SHORT on that ESSAY...

@Shavkat (137238)
Philippines
January 11, 2019 9:11am CST
"Can you write yourself in one paragraph?" I had this idea when asking my student to write about his personal information. After a few minutes, he submitted his compositions with a single paragraph. A sudden reaction is to ask, "Is this how short your life is?" Don't get me wrong about this concern. It is an honest way to push him to the highest level of his ability in making sentences. "How short is short in writing about yourself?" "Can you know someone's persona through his or her wordings in writing?" Image Credit: encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com
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@JudyEv (326431)
• Rockingham, Australia
12 Jan 19
Of course there would be a lot missing in one paragraph but you could probably judge the essence of a person if they were honest with their writing.
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@Shavkat (137238)
• Philippines
12 Jan 19
I agree. We can tell how their person into the way how it was written. It is best to write more about their personal life information to capture the readers' attention.
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• Santiago, Chile
12 Jan 19
It'd be hard to write myself in one paragraph, though I would give it a shot. Sometimes in the shortest lines we can come up with great descriptions of us.
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@Shavkat (137238)
• Philippines
12 Jan 19
In knowing others, we need to know the detailed information about them. Indeed, we can make short descriptions about ourselves. For the reason that our life is not an open book for everyone to see.
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@Shavkat (137238)
• Philippines
13 Jan 19
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• Santiago, Chile
12 Jan 19
@Shavkat You are right.
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• Egypt
11 Jan 19
The most difficult thing in this world is talk about myself. Why ? Because if I say I can talk a bout my self I will be a lier. BUT ... I know myself from others opinions.....they are the mirror to myself. You are great keep writing
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@Shavkat (137238)
• Philippines
12 Jan 19
Thank you. I do believe that people can write about themselves and let others know their real persona. Even if they are not honest into their writings, there will be an existence of inconsistency in between their sentences. Welcome to myLot.
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