Random Moods on a Sunday : Part I : Another poetry attempt

Silhouette
@ptrikha_2 (45485)
India
March 24, 2019 6:43am CST
Today is Sunday 24 March 2019. I am going through various moods and thoughts and one is a poem that occurred to my mind : The silhouette of the lonely bencher in the park As the lights fade. The evening turns to dusk. The shadows give way to the darkness and the dark sky The man on the bench sits all alone, save for a few folks here and there Lost in the thoughts of his loneliness Of where he failed or what went wrong Of being so different from the world around him He pays no heed to his silhouette right besides him As he has been conditioned from his childhood not to look at shadows too much Yet his mind and sight moves to watch the silhouette That does gives a fright to him Of being something like out of the world Yet then the man looks at the sky and the moon and a handful of watchful stars and his gaze at them makes him think That after all I am not alone I am not the only forlorn and lonely one Because there is the sky and beyond to give me company And a strength of the solitude enters his veins To make him fresh again And readies him to face the challenges of the next day again. I hope you might like it ! Image source: https://pixabay.com/photos/silhouette-father-and-son-sundown-1082129/ Pixabay License Free for commercial use No attribution required
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@arunima25 (85328)
• Bangalore, India
24 Mar 19
I loved it. You have a flair for poetry. Please make more attempts.
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
24 Mar 19
Thanks a lot @arunima25
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
24 Mar 19
That was a nice one.. If this really your first poem
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
24 Mar 19
@Sheali no I have attempted a few more. This might have been third or fourth attempt, but now I would seriously submit it to a proper place.
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
26 Mar 19
@Sheali yes I would try.
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@Sreekala (34312)
• India
25 Mar 19
You can try more
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
26 Mar 19
@Sreekala yes sure !
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@just4him (306241)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
25 Mar 19
A good poem. I like the perspective you see of the person sitting on the bench.
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
26 Mar 19
Thanks a lot @just4him
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@dgobucks226 (34369)
26 Mar 19
Very nice poem. We can always find something around us to keep us company. Whether it be the company of nature or just our passing thoughts and observations. The quiet reflection of solitude on a park bench comforts us, entertains us, it is not loneliness but pleasant.
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
27 Mar 19
@dgobucks226 often the solitude in a park helps us if we are going through some tough time, or if we start feeling philosophical about our live(s).
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@ptrikha_2 (45485)
• India
30 Mar 19
@dgobucks226 Yeah very much right!
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