My contribution to Maluse 's challenge -poem parodies 2
@allknowing (130122)
India
April 20, 2019 11:25pm CST
Poem by Thomas Gray - Elegy in the Country Church Yard
The curfew tolls the knell of parting day,
The lowing herd wind slowly o'er the lea,
The plowman homeward plods his weary way,
And leaves the world to darkness and to me.
Now fades the glimm'ring landscape on the sight,
And all the air a solemn stillness holds,
Save where the beetle wheels his droning flight,
And drowsy tinklings lull the distant folds;
Save that from yonder ivy-mantled tow'r
The moping owl does to the moon complain
Of such, as wand'ring near her secret bow'r,
Molest her ancient solitary reign.
Beneath those rugged elms, that yew-tree's shade,
Where heaves the turf in many a mould'ring heap,
Each in his narrow cell for ever laid,
The rude forefathers of the hamlet sleep.
MY VERSION:
The cooker whistle whistles away
Rice is cooked it seems to say
The maid wearily walks in there
To deal with what is her duty today
The rice is over cooked she says with a sigh
Everything comes to a standstill why oh why
but for those who have no taste for rice
there is bread to eat and curry with spice
The lady of the house comes rushing in
Complaining how careless the maid has been
The day is spoilt she seems to say
Cannot live without rice one more day
She digs in the fridge to see beneath
Fish and meat so gently sleep
What can she do with all that stuff
She bangs the fridge and leaves in a huff
COMPOSED UPON WESTMINSTER BRIDGE William Wordsworth 1802 Earth has not anything to show more fair: Dull would he be of soul who could pass by A sight so...
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@arunima25 (85579)
• Bangalore, India
21 Apr 19
I saw her post with the challenge but I did not respond as I am not so good with it anymore. I was once but now I am totally out of practice.
You are good. I chuckled reading your version.
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@allknowing (130122)
• India
21 Apr 19
I occasionally try my hand at poetry and have a small collection.
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@allknowing (130122)
• India
21 Apr 19
@arunima25 Do that. Your English is good and it should be cake walk for you
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@arunima25 (85579)
• Bangalore, India
21 Apr 19
@allknowing That is good. I have not done any in a decade now and I am totally out of practice now. It will take some time to warm up if I will try it again.
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@allknowing (130122)
• India
22 Apr 19
It has to be funny but at the same time have relevance to the original poem
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@allknowing (130122)
• India
22 Apr 19
@JudyEv You can pick your own poem and then try to create something funny.
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@JudyEv (326126)
• Rockingham, Australia
22 Apr 19
@allknowing Uh oh. It's sounding too hard already :(
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@allknowing (130122)
• India
21 Apr 19
Thanks. I like dabbling in poetry and have written a few. This one was not easy. Had to see that it had some flavour of the existing poem.
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@LadyDuck (459212)
• Switzerland
21 Apr 19
@allknowing This is what makes this challenge interesting.
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