Winter Haiku / myLot

United States

December 15, 2020 11:58am CST

I'm loving playing with Haiku poems at the moment -- and I've read some great ones on here (try searching the haiku tag for more). This is one I just wrote, inspired by looking up at the stars on a cold, winter night. I hope you like it! My star shines brightly In the dark and wintry sky. Eyes reflect moonlight. Thank you for reading. These little poems are great, I think, because you can kind of say more, I mean evoke an image or feeling really well, by actually saying less. If that makes sense!

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Anne

@Hytton03 (5454)

• Philippines

20 Dec 20

Yeah i like it my friend ;)

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Arianna

@Borlotti (268)

• United States

20 Dec 20

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Titia Geertman

@TitiaG (251)

• Netherlands

16 Dec 20

I love your Haiku. They are fun to write and I wrote many haikus.

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Arianna

@Borlotti (268)

• United States

17 Dec 20

Hi Titia! Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm new to writing haikus but I'm definitely enjoying it so far and I've already discovered so many talented people like yourself who also write them.

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@rz3300 (357)

• United States

16 Dec 20

Pretty good. It's been a while since I have read a haiku

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Arianna

@Borlotti (268)

• United States

16 Dec 20

Hi AR! Thanks for reading this. I'm so glad you liked it. You should try writing one or two haikus of you can find the time. It's great fun and a bit of a challenge, too.

@Merliva (3539)

• San Marino

15 Dec 20

they are beautiful

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Arianna

@Borlotti (268)

• United States

15 Dec 20

Hi Merliva! I think so, too.