Poetry -- "Awakening"
By Ambur25
@Ambur25 (1006)
United States
December 4, 2006 8:45am CST
In control with the world at her feet
She has everything she could ever dream
A nice house and beautiful kids
The perfect life it would seem
She lives her life behind a two-way mirror
Clawing at the cold hard glass
In the dark and on her knees
She watches her life and lets it pass
For no one see's her in her time of need
She's the one who's always been strong
But, at her lowest she simply gives up
It's been this way for too long
The room goes black, she can no longer see
She struggles back to her feet
Rising slowly, face in her hands
She admits her final defeat
Searching for a light as she slowly walks
Her body is getting cold
Scared and weak she tries to stand tall
She tries to be strong and tries to be bold
Her body is tired and she can no longer stand
She collapses to the floor
Just as she does the light comes on
She's more scared than ever before
She lays there shivering, cold and alone
Suddenly she hears a voice
He says it's too late to turn back now
She has no other choice
Too weak to move so she opens her eyes
The light was as bright as the sun
Her eyes focus on a puddle of blood
And she realizes what she's done
She's lived her life from behind this mirror
Begging to be seen
Cold and alone she starts to cry
Then she awakens from this dream
Sitting up in her bed she takes a look around
And quietly starts to cry
She knows that something has to be done
She can't let life pass her by
She gets out of bed, still slightly weak
And makes her way down the hall
She hears the sounds of two small angels
From the other side of the wall
Getting closer she opens the door
Not knowing what she'd see
There's toys all around and the room is a mess
But, this is how it should be
One angel runs to her grabbing her leg
He hugs as tight as he can
She realizes that this is her life
And it's all part of the plan
Looking up at her from big sparkling eyes
She stares at this angel's face
He jumps into her arms with "Good morning Mommy!"
And She whispers, "You are my saving grace..."
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@disturbedgd (1819)
• South Africa
4 Dec 06
0o very touching mine sucks comeparing to yours lol
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@sunshinelady (7609)
• United States
19 May 07
Your poetry is excellent. There are web sites that you can get your poetry published and I know some of them will even pay you for your poetry. I think it is good enough for you to check a couple of these sites out.
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