Urdu Poetry

it a very good effort from ur side i realy appreciate your effport but you know that this world is a termprory world and we all are conscious about our own works and we would have forget the respect of all other humans, thats why our world is becoming a complex world as you thought in your mnd if we all do like that and help each otjer then this beautiful world would becoe more beautiful and the humanity will be safe from all desosters and would live their life more prosperiously so continue you verses i will collect them and them when i foud some spare time i will think about and then i will try to start it by my own