Poetry time...lets drain out brain to write poetry...
By lancomegirl
@lancomegirl (257)
January 21, 2007 3:57am CST
will you ever? I dont think you will ever fully understand,
how you've touched my life and made me who i am
i dont think you could ever know
just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.
dont think you ever comprehend
how you made my dreams come true or how you've opened my heart to love and the wonders it can do.
you've allowed me to experience something very hard to find unconditional love that exists in my body,soul and mind.
I dont think you could ever feel all the love i have give and I'm sure you'll never realize you've my will to live.
you are amazing person and without you i dont know where i'd be.
having you in my life completes and fulfills every part of me.
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3 responses
@buenavida (9985)
• Sweden
21 Jan 07
I have written some poems and sent them to www.poetry.com
To my big surprise some of them have been published.
You can read a couple of them in my profile.
I like to describe the amazing nature here where I live, near the Arctic Circle.
@lancomegirl (257)
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22 Jan 07
i never heard about that website but that was awesome i was critisized about what i posted,, but its how the word goes but what in ur heart right ...keep writing and be proud of it.;)
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@buenavida (9985)
• Sweden
22 Jan 07
Jus keep posting your poems to poetry.com - I am sure they will be published too.
I have only three poems there and they all were published in different poetry collections and one of them even was read and recorded. I cannot afford to buy these books but it is really great that they appreciate our attemts to write poetry.
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@lancomegirl (257)
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23 Jan 07
ok...thanks i will try that if i have more time browsing in the net...take care and God bless u!!
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@rein2410 (809)
• Australia
21 Jan 07
Is this the poem that you made. Well, I would like to comment on the poem. Its a good poem that delivered its message to the reader but, I guess its just too obvious and the meaning is not deep enough, I would say, this is one of those modern poem that people made these days, Maybe its just me, but I wrote old fashion of poem. I really like the old words that being used in old poems.
@sumofalltears (3988)
• United States
2 Apr 07
Very nice poem, lots of feeling there. Hope you continue to write because you show a lot of potential.
