She makes my day -One of my poems

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I thought of posting this a long time back but was wondering if it'd sound corny.Anyways i'm doing it now.Its entitled "she makes my day". She speaks to me and i listen quietly Like a faithful child nodding to his mother beside I gaze at her face and marvel at her beauty i see the future in her eyes so mild yet sharper than a knife Her lips they taste so sweet sweeter is the perfume she believes She caresses me with her hands so gentle than the smoothest breeze a flower can handle i dont care if its day or night as long as she's at my sight O i wish i could forever be singing this sweet bliss melody. Thats about it.So do guys like it?