(,")WhaT You Are To Me(",)

@lani0529 (1726)
Philippines
March 4, 2007 4:16am CST
I saw this poem written in one of my books and thought of sharing this to all of you. Hope you will like it and feel free to share your views and feelings.(",) "What You are to Me" I am a rose, you are my thorns, clutching to me, protecting me. I am the sun, you are my rays, helping me to shine and to be all that I can. I am a lake, you are my water, filling me with ideas, dreams and hopes for the future. I am a tree, you are my leaves, sharing who and what I am and becoming an important part of my life. I am a heart, you are my beat, beating rhythmitically to my happiness, my fears, my sadness, my excitement. I am me and you are with me, to share all that I am, to share LIFE, LOVE and HAPPINESS...
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8 responses
@AmbiePam (46228)
• United States
8 Mar 07
Wow, that is an awesome poem. How simply but beautifully expressed! Thank you for posting this - I think this poem will start my day off quite well.
@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
11 Mar 07
I'm so glad that you appreciated the poem. I like it alot. Too bad, many don't ever bother to read this one. Thanks for dropping by.(",) Enjoy your day!
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@mayenskie (1308)
• Philippines
6 Mar 07
That's a beautiful poem, i don't think i will be able to write one like that. Its simple yet it can touch one's heart. It reminds why friendship is so special and the bond that keep two people together. Thanks for sharing.
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@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
7 Mar 07
Thanks for sharing your views as well.(",)
@austere (2816)
• Philippines
1 Jul 07
that's a nice poem you got there.:) i like that. i mean, i believe i can relate to that poem. that's how i feel for my boyfriend. hehehe i like making poems too. there was a time when i was in college when i would always bring a pen and paper handy. i carry them even in the jeepney and tried writing something while sitting and waiting for the jeepney to arrive to it's destination. it is best that we should write what we think right away or we will lose it. i mean, with the work and activities of our mind, it wouldn't be possible for us to remember everything!:) i wasn't able to make a poem lately. i have been busy with work and everything else. but i just wish someday i will be able to get a vacation near the beach and just try to compose a beautiful poem for the important people in my life.:)
@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
2 Jul 07
Hello austere!(",) You are some kind of a poet!(",) Why don't you share some of your poems with us. For sure, your poems is more about love, life and relationships. Thank you for the appreciation of the poem. I like it too very much that is why I am sharing it with everyone! Have a great day!(",)
@heartsick (832)
• Philippines
8 Jun 07
ohh.. that is so sweet.. i wish someday,, someone will write a poem or a song for me.. but that poem is really sweet.. have a nice day!
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@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
8 Jun 07
Hello heartsick!(",) I hope that the poem did heal your sick heart.Lolz... Thank you for dropping by and for sharing your views. Have a great day!(",)
@magnet (2089)
• United States
8 Jun 07
When I read this poem I think about my husband. How our togetherness makes us better. It's like we are two in one.
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@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
8 Jun 07
Hello magnet!(",) This discussion of mine has been dormant for months that's why I'm really thankful that you appreciated it.(",) Hope that your relationship with your husband will last for a lifetime. God bless always!(",)
@greengal (4288)
• United States
5 Apr 07
This is a beautiful poem lani, very touching and meaningful. I write poetry and enjoy reading poems as well. This poem really made me happy, good feelings and thoughts always do! Thanks for sharing this lani, good day!
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@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
5 Apr 07
Hi greengal!(",) I'm glad that you appreciate it. Hope you can share your poems to us as well. Thanks for dropping by!(",) Good day to you to!(",)
• Philippines
5 Apr 07
i like that poem it reminds me all my friends,,,for me the meaning of that is what ever happen,many problems will come the friendship of us will always be true as long as we are there to help each other....
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@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
5 Apr 07
Olah rhionclead!(",) What a unique name!(",) I'm glad that you dropped by and expressed your thoughts about this poem. Thank you for sharing!(",)
@sarapooht (271)
• Philippines
5 Apr 07
Hi Lani! Thats a very beautiful and lovely poem but i really do not understand it much. I only think that the author is the main character because the poem starts with the letter "I". I'm really touched because the author is really emphasizing that he really loves the person in the poem.
@lani0529 (1726)
• Philippines
5 Apr 07
Hi sarapooht!(",) I'm glad that you were able to respond to this discussion because its been here for along time and nobody seems to drop by for quite sometime to read this post. Yes indeed, the author is very much expressive of his feelings.(",) Thanks again!(",)