Thought this might be fun...any takers?

@cher913 (25895)
Canada
March 20, 2007 3:48pm CST
I thought it might be fun to write a bit here...fiction is not really my fortay, but i wondered if anyone wanted to either write a couple paragraphs before or after what i have written...maybe we could write a story??!! Nathan raised his hand to get Hillary’s attention. He knew he had to tell her how he felt, but then he chided himself for being so foolish. How can you tell her? He thought to himself After all, he was his TA and well, at least 5 years older than him. Nathan looked up and Hillary was standing in front of him. “What’s up?” Hillary asked, eyeing him. “I love you” Nathan blurted out. Immediately embarrassed, Nathan shrank back from his desk like a finger that had touched a hot pot. Hillary looked at him, Nathan could see that she was more than a little surprised at his revelation. “Um, ok…” Suddenly finding herself at a loss for words. After an uncomfortable minute of silence, she seemed to find her voice again, she said “Can we talk about this, um, later?”
2 responses
• United States
21 Mar 07
love this idea ok.... Little did Nathan know that Hillary was planning on telling him that she was already involved with another guy. Hillary didnt know how to tell Nathan, he was a sweet guy and she liked him, just not that way. She was in love with James, not Nathan...James.
@kurtbiewald (2629)
• United States
20 Mar 07
Nathan replied, um, ok He also was thinking, she didn't just dis me the way beautiful women often do. She said talk about it later. He was talkin silently to himself since she said later. Anyway, he felt a sort of glow inside, being cautious though cuz what if she is gonna dis him. Anyway it feels nice for now. He felt nice in anticipating what the future might bring and what he might hear later.