Who Am I?
By dazediva
@dazediva (166)
March 23, 2007 5:26pm CST
Do you know me?
What is my identity?
Who am I to you
amongst all those
you've met?
Will you remember
my name long
after we've parted
ways?
Or will I remain
a hauntingly
familiar face?
How many of 'me'
have you come
across today?
Next time, perhaps,
you'll remember
me by name...
perhaps you'll know
me for me...
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I thought I'd share this piece of writing with my friends on MyLot ... I've been writing on and off for a few years now and would like to know your thoughts, reflections, feelings, and analysis on the above work ...
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5 responses
@silver_shaddow (1204)
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23 Mar 07
hey, nice piece you got there. I don't know if I should reply to each question, or leave it at that to admire like a pricelss work of art.
yet if we ever parted ways, I will surely remember your name. It will be with me forever as I wear it like an amulet around my neck. Every rose has it's sent, so I could never meet so many of "you" as there's only ONE you. I haven't seen your face, just fragments of your life, that is who you are, so I can say freely and ease, I do know you for you.. :)
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@dazediva (166)
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24 Mar 07
Ah Silver, the poet in you shines through :) I'll contact you in 30 years or so and see if you still have the amulet :P
I'm trying to respond to the comment you made on the photo but it says you have to be my friend for me to respond :S tell them you are my friend !!
So I'll just have to reply here ... OI don't be cheeky !
@zirgham (601)
• Pakistan
24 Mar 07
Nice work
But in my view
Yes, I know you
you are the identity of love
you must be in the list to be loved.
your name will be engraved on my heart
but if you like to expose it to me.
you are the hope for a successful man
never led down youself.
@silver_shaddow (1204)
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13 May 07
staring at the sea
will she come?
is there hope for me?
after all is said and done
anything @ any price
all of this for "you"all the spoils of a wasted life
all of this for "you"all the world has closed her eyes
tried faith but all worn thin
for all we could have done
and all that could have been
the ocean pulls me close
and whispers in my ear
the destiny i've chose
all becoming clear . . .
reocurrents have had their say
the time is drawing near
washes me away
please make me disappear
as i descend from grace
in arms of undertow
i will take my place
in the great below
i can still feel "you"
even so far away
:'(
@Low333333 (223)
• China
15 Dec 07
oh good!i like the theme! and your words let me lost in my memory^^^
thanks
