poem...you must read

By A B
Scottsdale, Arizona
April 9, 2007 11:13am CST
Wen u sleep , sum1 weeps. There lies a heap which is deep. Sum1 cares, d otha fears, Who is serious, who isnt , isnt d quest, who continues to stay solves d rest, Sleep wen stars peep, make d otha to reap, The one who dint go to sleep is d one who recieves. Recievin not jus material, but in givin does he recieve. Let d ppl percieve, wat dey hav 2. U b a part of d hail. Hail to heal, heres d deal, make the spl sum1 feel...
1 response
@Khyatii (237)
• United States
9 Apr 07
she is very talented..encourage her to write more
• Scottsdale, Arizona
11 Apr 07
ok,thank you for your encouragement,i would tell her actually told her about your comment and she said that she will write more and more.so thank you and good luck